November 18, 200817 yr New sig, c/c rate/hate... And no one commented on this stock sig, I desperately need help for them:
November 18, 200817 yr I can't comment on the Stock, but I can on Luigi: Get rid of the White Border, and possible the swirl around him (Although, you could just lower the transparency on the swirl). And the C4D on the left is a tad too distracting. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
November 18, 200817 yr Don't put C4D's in a random place. On any sig. :-# Soa told the golden problem about you. On stock, I don't like the grunge brushing(?) and smudging on the left side of the main pic. Especially thanks to the other part of the stock right next to it. I hope you understood this. So I've noticed this thread's regulars all follow similar trends. RPG is constantly dealing with psycho exes.Muggi reminds us of the joys of polygamy.Saq is totally oblivious to how much chicks dig him.I strike out every other week.Kalphite wages a war against the friend zone.Randox pretty much stays rational.Etc, etc
November 18, 200817 yr Don't like either of them really. The Luigi one doesn't have very good composition, and as Soa said, don't put C4D's in random places. The smudging looks a bit generic too - remember that one of the fundamental techniques of smudging is slight movements of the wrist. DON'T ADD TEXT! As for the stock, it's probably the better of the two, slightly better composition, though I don't like the brushing on the guy's back. Though there is alright contrast in the tag. Maybe use a few adjustments on your tags; especially the Luigi one. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
November 18, 200817 yr Author Thanks. Harsh, but thanks. I'll probably take the swirl away, and add some more c4ds to help with it.
November 18, 200817 yr Sorry if I sounded harsh, I'm just pointing out the bad things about it. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
November 19, 200817 yr Apart from the random C4Ds and text, I think it has potential. I'd just get rid of the current background altogether, it just doesn't work well with the cleaner, more vector-y look of the render and pentoolings IMO. But if you add some more shapes and patterns, I think it could look pretty good. pixel avvy by me deviantART
November 19, 200817 yr Author Right now I am a tad busy (Exams and revision and a couple of big asignments) So i'll probably do it this weekend. Anyone got any good vector brush/shapes?
November 19, 200817 yr Search around on dA if you want any decent vector stuff/shapes. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
November 19, 200817 yr I've actually got a pack made myself. I attempted to make brushes like But mine suck. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
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