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Luigi, yes?


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I can't comment on the Stock, but I can on Luigi:

 

 

 

Get rid of the White Border, and possible the swirl around him (Although, you could just lower the transparency on the swirl). And the C4D on the left is a tad too distracting.

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Don't put C4D's in a random place. On any sig. :-#

 

Soa told the golden problem about you. On stock, I don't like the grunge brushing(?) and smudging on the left side of the main pic. Especially thanks to the other part of the stock right next to it. I hope you understood this.

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So I've noticed this thread's regulars all follow similar trends.

 

RPG is constantly dealing with psycho exes.

Muggi reminds us of the joys of polygamy.

Saq is totally oblivious to how much chicks dig him.

I strike out every other week.

Kalphite wages a war against the friend zone.

Randox pretty much stays rational.

Etc, etc

 

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Don't like either of them really.

 

The Luigi one doesn't have very good composition, and as Soa said, don't put C4D's in random places. The smudging looks a bit generic too - remember that one of the fundamental techniques of smudging is slight movements of the wrist. DON'T ADD TEXT!

 

 

 

As for the stock, it's probably the better of the two, slightly better composition, though I don't like the brushing on the guy's back. Though there is alright contrast in the tag.

 

 

 

Maybe use a few adjustments on your tags; especially the Luigi one.

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Apart from the random C4Ds and text, I think it has potential. I'd just get rid of the current background altogether, it just doesn't work well with the cleaner, more vector-y look of the render and pentoolings IMO. But if you add some more shapes and patterns, I think it could look pretty good.

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