well o deary me.. its the same linework that i made for a earlier sig and practice shading topic!

 

 

 

a well i changed it to make it less buff, look like me, and ooh clothing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the shirt was supossed to say Ketch-up but .. argh.. nevermind

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

uhh yeah..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

new version

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the right shoe is pointing down a little, maybe make it more on the ground, unless he can fly :D . my teacher can fly.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also that shirt must fit you a little short if its above your wrist... and if thats supposed to be as close to you as possible, then maybe less neck muscle? unless your like a buff dude which you said you werent but...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i dont really like that black line on the hand, even though i can understand why its there, maybe make it a dark flesh color instead of black?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I just had to find somethings wrong with it lol :P

 

 

 

good work m8!

Some 1-2px shadows on the left side of his clothes (very subtle) would help show that they are wrapping around his body. The seem to end kinda abruptly right now. And I think the hand needs a little more work (shading wise).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Your chest is nearly reaching Arnold's buffness. I don't want to jump to conclusions or anything, but it seems a tad exaggerated... :? If you really are that buff *cough* I think you should buffen up his legs and arms aswell (unless he only works out his breasts, which kinda seems odd).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

feels kinda strange to be talking about the proportions of your breasts...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, I think its great overall, except the breastbone issues. Awesome job on the clothing folds and attention to detail, but I think you should start softening/colouring/removing those black outlines. "Marks Pixel Guide" had a pretty good little thing on how to do get some nice selective outlines on pixels. There are other tutorials that you can find off of quick googles.

Ok so everyone basically got the CC down...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

aww you look adorable!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:)

im sure thats what you look like. that strong and all that... lol but its a good picture

i hardly even noticed the bufness :shock: hell i didnt even look at it..

 

 

 

ok so i removed the breasts (im sorry i really didnt spend any atention to it)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

so i changed it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

new version

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and my neck is really that way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

about the outlines: yeah i tried ( i know how to do it dont worry) but it ended up looking weird.. i even did anti-aliasing.. but that made my face look fat :?

 

 

 

shading re-done a little to, and darn i still cant figure out pants there hard to do.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

uhm thanks .. i guess princessa :|

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

..yeah kingofduke that was a little mistake.. the original line-art was that for a pker.. so i made it all buff but i took it down a little and then i suddenly got the idea to make it a self portrait! yet i forgot toning it down a little more.

Looks good :D

thats bloody cool man, good job, i love the shoes!