December 15, 200817 yr Okay, followed a tut for a new style, and I quite like the result. It's kinda empty, but that's how it should be. Whaddya think? I'm not so sure on the text. C/C please! V2 Halved the width of the lines and took out the bottom half of text: EDIT: I think I saved it with a little better quality. EDIT2: Sharpened render. EDIT3: Another sig! A different style this time, but still new. Personally, I don't think it's that great, need to use different colours next time. V2: Tried to make it a little more vibrant. I'm going to do another one in this style, because I think it could be good, it's just I picked the wrong colours for this one. So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be.
December 15, 200817 yr Insanity, why crazy frog? Great outcome, off centre placement looks good, though I think you should remove the text altogether. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
December 15, 200817 yr Author Insanity, why crazy frog? Great outcome, off centre placement looks good, though I think you should remove the text altogether. I wanted a simple render, not too many colours. It was the only decent looking one I could find. Oh well, it's not actually the crazy frog though, so it's not too bad. Do you mean remove text, but keep bars? EDIT: I originally had text like this, but I didn't really like it. | |ron | |= | ist Not a great drawing, but can you see what I mean? So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be.
December 15, 200817 yr Thats a bad render. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
December 15, 200817 yr Author Thats a bad render. Why? So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be.
December 15, 200817 yr It's blurry and stuff, dunno if you did that though. Should have elaborated more. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
December 15, 200817 yr Author Just uploaded a less compressed version, is this any better? Also, I didn't blur it myself, it probably happened when I scaled it. Strange things happen when I do that. So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be.
December 15, 200817 yr Sharpen it then :P danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
December 15, 200817 yr Author Done, and uploaded. So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be.
December 15, 200817 yr It looks alright. I'd say make those lines going through the text about half as thick. There's a rule in typography that if you cut a letter/word in half lengthways, always keep the top half, as it's still possible to read. Try it with lines half as thick, and then try it without the lower part of the text showing.
December 15, 200817 yr Author It looks alright. I'd say make those lines going through the text about half as thick. There's a rule in typography that if you cut a letter/word in half lengthways, always keep the top half, as it's still possible to read. Try it with lines half as thick, and then try it without the lower part of the text showing. Done. I quite like this one, thanks! So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be.
December 16, 200817 yr Oh yeah, that tutorial. Sure, it's ok, but it looks like you just pasted the render on top of the fractals/vectors. Try to blend it somehow.
December 16, 200817 yr Author Oh yeah, that tutorial. Sure, it's ok, but it looks like you just pasted the render on top of the fractals/vectors. Try to blend it somehow. How should I do that? A bit of smudging? So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be.
December 16, 200817 yr Put some vector stuff on top. I actually like the 2nd more. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
December 16, 200817 yr It looks like the smudging has been inverted. It doesn't work, plus the smudging is pretty bland.
December 16, 200817 yr Inverted isn't always bad; http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff18 ... HO88V2.png Seriously one of the best I've seen. - its not by me. I'm not that good. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
December 16, 200817 yr I don't really like it, although it is pretty good considering it's inverted. Obviously there are ways to make inverted stuff look good, but you'll agree that 90% of the time it looks rubbish or isn't used properly.
December 16, 200817 yr I'll take it. get 50 posts already :P danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
December 16, 200817 yr 2nd Tag Good points - good composition render placement - you are good at this :thumbup: weak points - colours seem washed out watery effect looks odd soft brushing to the left of Samus's head looks very weird where it is, not to mention a dull colour too. so really, make your tags MORE VIBRANT good work, keep it up :thumbup: 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
December 17, 200817 yr I don't like what you have done on the second signature. The smudging doesn't appeal to me, and I don't like how parts of the render have been pasted a few times underneath. And the Grey Radial Gradient/Circle is distracting. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
December 17, 200817 yr the first style isn't horrible, a different render and some tweaking take it from good to great second style, one word, no, there is nothing that i like about, colors have a harsh mix, the flow is choppy, the render is blurry, there is barely a focal point, overall not a very good idea, please dont continue with it
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