Signature made for sotf, C/C?

[VjuliusT]

 

Tried something new (Quickie).

 

 

 

Constructive criticism please? (+ what's good or bad?)

[Star.]

The background looks blurred, I can't tell if its supposed to be part of the render or a c4d or something. The repetitiveness makes it look distorted, I'm not sure if thats in a bad or good way, I think it's leaning more towards the bad.

[Sam]

The wavy lines smell.

[Ouchy]

I don't like those random bars, next to his head, they look, misplaced.

[Jopie211]

Good:

 

Composition, mainly the focal placement.

 

Depth is pretty good.

 

Colour scheme is decent, although I probably would have gone for red-ish instead of pink (seems to fit the focal more :P).

 

C4Ds work/pretty good flow.

 

 

 

Not so good:

 

Clipping masks (assuming that's what they are) next to his face: pretty distracting.

 

Wavy lines/effects on the left: too random and chaotic IMO, I'd try cleaning the signature up a little.

 

The background is quite bright, also a bit distracting. Not sure if you can do something about that without making it look bad, though.

 

Colour scheme, like I said, maybe try more red-ish one.

[VjuliusT]

Thanks guys and gals :thumbup:.