It's been pretty long time since I've made anything. Aint had the inspiration.

 

 

 

But anyways, here it is. Took around 1.5 hours.

 

Not bad, C4D sticks out wayyy too much though, it has the wrong colors, and its not really blended at all.

Bad C4d

 

bad flow

 

no perspective

 

Horrible smudging

 

LQ

 

blurry lens flare

 

 

 

Not that great, but KIU :P

I suggest using a smaller canvas to begin with as it's easier to work with as it's hard to fully use the space in a large canvas on a good looking way.

It was a request I got on another forum. That's the size. I would've taken 360x120 otherwise, like this:

 

 

 

 

 

 

I made this 2 days ago, following a tut on GimpTalk. You could C/C on this one, too.

Try using c4ds to blend your renders in, because it looks like you just pasted it in there

Try using c4ds to blend your renders in, because it looks like you just pasted it in there

 

 

 

Yes steal more stuff to help make work better, brilliant.

 

 

 

I know it's not stealing to use a resource, but somewehere along the line the artist has to do something themselves you know.

You tell 'em Nadril. The colour contrast also sucks.

It was a request I got on another forum. That's the size. I would've taken 360x120 otherwise, like this:

 

 

 

 

 

 

I made this 2 days ago, following a tut on GimpTalk. You could C/C on this one, too.

 

 

 

Blargh, the Author of that sig tut needs to be shot. It looks terrible! (Not yours).

 

 

 

Your butterfly one:

 

 

 

C4D needs to be blended better, colours aren't that great, smudging, could be better. 5/10.

 

 

 

And that white thingy over her face, take it off.

^ I agree with the comment on taking out the white blur over her face.

 

 

 

Splat out the C4D on the Butterfly Girl one and blend it in better. Add some depth, flow or try to bend it such that she is sitting on something and there is a wall behind her. Work on the composition and design. The colors match too well with the focal, which is both good and bad. Tone out the colors and, as suggested, try to remove some of the unused, blank space.

 

 

 

As for the Second one...

 

 

 

The background isn't too bad, but the color choice isn't too bad. The render is quite a "realistic" feel, so the background should try to reflect that and not look "fantasy like".

 

 

 

Once again, remove the white screened things over their heads. Try using overlay blending for lighting,

I know I put a bit too much of that light on the girl sig... But a bit less of it and it looks good.