After this I'm taking a break from creating avatars

 

Without outline:

 

 

With:

 

Its pretty good, I dont really like the ear/general coloring of it.

Its pretty good, I dont really like the ear/general coloring of it.

 

ya i think it would've been better a bit lighter

It's pretty thin, that's my only qualm with it. And the shading threw me off a little, there's a dot [indent?] in the cheek that stuck out.

The version without the outlines looks pretty good, my only problem is the shading on the 'main part' (the dark grey bits) of the helmet; it just doesn't seem very realistic (there doesn't really seem to be a clear lightsource). But I haven't played RS in ages, so maybe just that's what the helmet looks like in the game, I don't know. :P

it has a weird shading, theres no direct light source that i can find, and for a metal helm it seems very weak and flimsy (sp).

 

 

 

do you have sketches working up to it to show us? we could help explain the problem from seeing past work. its like math u could have it all right until one part and ur whole outcome is thrown.

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: Damn jopie u beat me to it by seconds :ohnoes: :shock:

The whole helmet looks way too thin. I suggest you observe the shape of the helmet and post a newer version with a slight wider and not as tall version.

 

 

 

I do like the colours though ;)