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Red Lips and the Smoking Gun


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Sounds like a band name. Whatever.

 

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[Edit] Oh, and 100% Line tool/Paint bucket, no effects used at all.

Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can

Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude?

Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you?

Camera guy: still laughing

Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy

Camera guy: runs away still laughing

Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down

Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]!

Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!

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I think it looks very good to be honest, but there's something bothering me about the thickness of lines.

 

 

 

She is wearing a striped shirt and all, which looks good but I feel like her face-hair and gun lines are too thin compared to that.

 

Try to make those thicker, but leave the places that create detail (hairline, gun) the same thickness. I wonder how that would turn out.

 

 

 

It might look like crap, but at least I gave you my thoughts :P

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Yes, it will. I don't have a layered file.

Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can

Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude?

Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you?

Camera guy: still laughing

Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy

Camera guy: runs away still laughing

Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down

Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]!

Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!

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Nice. :thumbsup: Just that IMO the stripes should blend literally into the shirt instead of the sleeve.

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^That however, I can work on, after homework.

Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can

Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude?

Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you?

Camera guy: still laughing

Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy

Camera guy: runs away still laughing

Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down

Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]!

Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!

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Cool, can't wait to see it.

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It looks great but I'll give some things I think are a bit wrong. :/

 

 

 

The bottom of the gun looks a bit off as almost ever handgun are rectanglish.

 

 

 

The right of her hand looks cut off too much.

 

 

 

Other than that I think it looks great. :D

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looks quite good imo, one thing i noticed is that it looks like someone took a bite out of her hand. little weird looking imo. other than that, it's awesome.

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I was hoping no one would notice about the hand. :P I'll fix Monday, I've too much work, and Anchorman is on in 7 minutes.

Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can

Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude?

Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you?

Camera guy: still laughing

Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy

Camera guy: runs away still laughing

Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down

Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]!

Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!

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Effective use of spot coloring. Maybe on her right arm, make the lines actually cover up the lines on her shirt so it looks like the background is a solid sheet wrapping around her arm. Not sure how this will look, but it might turn out OK. Her face where her chin is looks a little funny. A bit blocky and gives her face a little bit of chub. Also, the gun she is holding, it seems as though it goes from a very 3d looking weapon from the handle, to a flat looking gun above her hand. The only other thing I could point out are her sunglasses. They seem a little bit strange.

 

 

 

Aside from this list of things that could be modified, this is a very effective piece. One of your better ones. It took me a while to come up with some places you could improve on this.

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Yes, it will. I don't have a layered file.

 

 

 

 

 

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Why don't you save the .pdn? :wall:

 

It's just the way I made it, I think I used 2 layers. One for the lines, another on additive to color the lips. And then I resized it, but I didn't save the large version. I always save the .pdn otherwise, and hardly ever the .png.

Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can

Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude?

Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you?

Camera guy: still laughing

Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy

Camera guy: runs away still laughing

Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down

Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]!

Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!

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