Skully Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Remembered to save the .psd this time, spent quite a while on this one. What can I do to improve? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DingoAte Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Looks very good :D I think it would look better with that light bit in the top left corner removed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted February 8, 2009 Author Share Posted February 8, 2009 That's the light source. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DingoAte Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Lol haha I feel like an idiot now xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted February 8, 2009 Author Share Posted February 8, 2009 Lol haha I feel like an idiot now xD Actually that was my bad, thought you said top right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tripsis Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Nice job! I like it a lot :thumbsup: I do think that the light source could have been faded into the blue a bit better though. The transition from white to blue seems a little sudden. But it's still nice as is. - 99 fletching | 99 thieving | 99 construction | 99 herblore | 99 smithing | 99 woodcutting - - 99 runecrafting - 99 prayer - 125 combat - 95 farming - - Blog - DeviantART - Book Reviews & Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DingoAte Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Lol haha I feel like an idiot now xD Actually that was my bad, thought you said top right. :wall: I was going to say "The light source is top right is it not?" but I just assumed you knew what you were talking about #-o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varda Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Ghost Recon <-Wait, is it Ghost Recon? I know about that game, and another one, which the both guys looks so similar. Hmm. Try to add a sepia filter over it, then fade it to 50% or so. It looks a bit blue. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 The liquified thingy on the left ruins it for me. Other than you did a good job using that C4D, although it's slightly too much white in the top right corner(imo). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wurmskin Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 I agree with Vjulius, the ocean rippleish effect on the left part of the sig doesn't do anything to add to the it. Other than that, its a well done piece :) . ^ Refresh for a new signature ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 The render is choppy D: Don't copy and paste the render with the black background, click on it to get it fullsize, then save it. Apart from that it looks quite good in composition terms :thumbup: 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate_Felix Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 ^the back of his helmet really looks cut off [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 The liquified thingy on the left ruins it for me. Other than you did a good job using that C4D, although it's slightly too much white in the top right corner(imo). Agreed. I also think it's a bit monotone, although that isn't the biggest problem in this case since you picked a good main colour. You could try blurring the choppy edge of the render in the top right slightly, it's quite distracting at the moment. Once again, I'd also get rid of the border, it kind of cuts the flow off too suddenly if that makes sense. Nice job though, you've really improved a lot. :thumbup: pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joes_So_Cool Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Much better then my stick figures in paint. Always remember you're unique, just like everyone else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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