um here it is ..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

o y erate it plz. lol flame away dont realy mind . and give me sum ideas of the backround im stuk lol.... and if your going 2 say things like the things in the picture out of proportion... well i beet u 2 it..

For a first try, it's definiately not bad. However, the left arm (left on the image) seems a little too wide compared to the right. Also, the right leg looks a little weird. You do seem to have the shading and the linework down very well, which is always a good sign.

looks pretty gothic-ish :| but thats just personal preference

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the shading doesnt show much shape and depth and the colors dont blend to much.

 

 

 

this makes me feel like finishing something i was supossed to finish long ago..

1rst answer fat arm=its cose the knee gets in the way off full wiev of the orher arm..

 

 

 

1nd answer shading=im not sure how else 2 shade man.. and if u have any tutes on pixel shading i would apreciateit but not the 1ns here..

GOD SO MANY TYPOS MAKES ME ANGRY, anyway moving on.. control yourself smelly..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the elbows stick out of his arm it looks like he has no hands.. and his "hands"

 

 

 

look like his nose also the no face ruins it he has no waist or lower the right leg or his left leg looks like a blob basically.. its funny how the tomb stone for zezima looks old even though he isnt even dead yet, and how the soil is patched like your going to grow something there and if thats a moon ive seen better..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but overall its ok for a "1rst" :?

lolz......ZEZIME R.I.P thats kinda funnyy....who though he was account sharing.....lolz me........because dam that guy was good.....im jelous....of that dude.....now im jelous of oldknigh lolz....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ow...the sig not to bad.......shading need a little bit work

and if u have any tutes on pixel shading i would apreciateit but not the 1ns here..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thank you i made half of those, good to know you don't like them :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

there aren't many other tutorials that go over these styles of pixel art (as in pixel signatures) so you wont find any luck there.

 

 

 

and what do you mean you dont know?? since when did anyone had to "know" how to shade? when you start a piece of "art" you have a vision of how it would look like right? well you make that and its a matter of putting effort in if it looks like it or not there is no "know" there is no "try" theres only a do or do not.

 

 

 

(sure small mistakes are human)

 

 

 

example: if you draw a character and it doesnt look quite as it was supossed to.. what do you do..?

 

 

 

A. you walk away and pretend its normal and hope nobody notices.

 

 

 

B. you put harder work in it and put in an endless amount of time in to fix it.

 

 

 

C. stuff your face with pie.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you can always fix a pixel sig if something is wrong with it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i hope anyone understands a word im saying :shock:

lol i said flaming was alowed lol.. but THIS IS MY 1RST TIME LOL.... and smellly your geting headache from ur sox dude ... and yup i get it the sig with the man with a been bag on his head

its 1st not 1rst! dammm please tip.it put grammar check in this forum its driving me crazy! just simple words.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

been bag? its BEAN OK, jeeze been means in the past hit me please anyone! quer please! its ok for a first just some things look stupid ;)

*slaps smelly* :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1st or 1rst.. doesnt really matter, "first" owns them all

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

no offense plya but i thought i talked in riddles :shock:

 

 

 

there has to be some kind of logic to it :shock:

lol i wanted to be joda..

 

 

 

Anyways... i tipe realy fast and don't read back what i write.

 

 

 

Nearly done with the edit , it has sum things tuched up to the person nealing down but the most things i done to that picture is summething like the backround.

lol i think im finished?

 

 

 

Give me what you think of this 1rst attempt at a pixel sig....

 

 

 

Not too shabby.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Stars look really weird, spice them up with some variety... dim ones, smaller ones, spread them out in some spots etc.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The colours you've picked for the character are maybe a bit too bright for a night scene.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Is the big grey thing in the sky the moon? If so, it looks very not moon like. The moon is a creamy colour and it has lots of craters in it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The light source is the moon and the candle? Well your shading doesn't represent that very well. Shadows would be on our view point, highlighting would be on the side we can't see.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The grave looks a bit funny... It should look something like this.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't have time to show you everything what I mean.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just keep practicing! :)

Well for a first try it is pretty good but the update was not for the best. The background I feel really ruined the atmosphere which before was goth-like. Proportions need to be fixed just a bit with the arms. Listen to Quer, he has leet advice

good for a 1rst (soz first) don't like the glowing sword though... maybe fading it away, not just a line

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

good job but

i made a new edit.. i worked on the stars moon and the shading, i tried to make it more goth like ,like jew said. um i did a litle work on the person but not alot has changed.i got no idea how to compso the hands other wise if hes preying. if you have any better ideas of how 2 make the hands look better plz do.

Alot better, the red glow is the way to go. The moon just needs to be a bit darker IMO and those are some big craters. Keep at working at it

tx jew is it dark enough now and you thiink i should make creaters smaller? and what else should i add....

Alot better, the red glow is the way to go. The moon just needs to be a bit darker IMO and those are some big craters. Keep at working at it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

um... whats imo :oops:

Things that need to be darkened

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The wilderness sign, it is way to light.

 

 

 

- Flowers

 

 

 

-That rock, change its shading aswell.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The craters need to be just a bit smaller

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

um... whats imo :oops:

In My Opinion (it's an acronym).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

How bout some clouds now?

ok tx il sahde abi more but abaut the clouds ..were should i put them on top of the starts or under and wot colour should they be?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit: tried it with clouds looked pretty crappy dude no offence.

 

 

 

any other ideas

the sig up 2 now

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it seems a bit empty...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- the spider web looks like it's hanging off the sign, I'd erase it a tad.

 

 

 

- the flowers look like small p-hats :lol:

 

 

 

- craters need to be smaller

 

 

 

- add some dead trees or sumthing in the bg to make it look a tad more interesting.

 

 

 

- You've coloured in the outline on the char, why don't you do that in the bg?

 

 

 

- The stars need to be more spread out, and not too obvious. TOne it down a bit. Also the far star on the right is half cut out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just a bit of friendly advice

 

 

 

It's a good idea though, good job overall :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~nuzza

i thogh their was something wrong with the web..

 

 

 

i was going 2 put in a tree ... now i will

 

 

 

and the flowers u cant get a brush smaller than that