I liek pie.

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And Illusion, dey gud new clan. Still dun mean I r joining :?

[Nadril]

I like how this looks a lot like a traditional medieval setting rather then, well, runescape. Very nice job although the mage looks pretty screwy. The knight in focus though is nice, much better than most attempts as runescape fan art where they make armor this really annoying blue.

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Mage, screwy, that's not good D:

[Shiny]

I like the style. A lot. This kinda sketchy style, it works. It is unique, and it looks good. Colours could be less bland, though I do like it. The text really kills it. Jellyeka Castle Voyage ftw?

[Star.]

Looking good :thumbup: That messy sketchyness is a great touch.

[hiimben]

Better job at defining the characters, the focused Knight in particular is pretty good. However, I feel that they are kind of washed out by the background. I think some more experimentation with colours could work out, and really distinguish the characters from the background.

 

 

 

But you are improving, which is good to see.

[Jopie211]

Better job at defining the characters, the focused Knight in particular is pretty good. However, I feel that they are kind of washed out by the background. I think some more experimentation with colours could work out, and really distinguish the characters from the background.

 

 

 

Agreed. I really like your style, but I don't think the messiness and the washed-out colours work that well here. It's just a bit too much of a monotone mess at the moment, it works for the background but I also think the characters in the foreground need to be defined a bit more.

[Pat_61]

*Relives the Moment*

 

GREAT GREAT GREAT....text... lol

 

 

 

It really does look good to me, though the characters do need more defining