Jump to content

Pixel Sig, Should I Continue it? (Need C&C + Ideas)


demonfirzen

Recommended Posts

Well here it is

 

 

 

pixelfoshizzel0kq.png

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it ok one question is it a boy or a girl lol :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and u should continue

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

one thing his/hers helm is too big

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and the arms and hands are weird

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and it needs more shading...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nice work overall and u should continue

~Michael

~My Second Year As a Tip-it'er

~Need a Sig?(Abstract, Grunge or Photomanip) Ask me.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

i did some shading and fixed up the hand:

 

 

 

pixelfoshizzel2vo7rh.png

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

whats the background gonna be?(u should use pillow-shading if ur not good with other types of shading.

~Michael

~My Second Year As a Tip-it'er

~Need a Sig?(Abstract, Grunge or Photomanip) Ask me.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Hmm, Your awesome at shading but that sword looks odd, the hand is wrong and the face is outta place.

 

 

 

Other then that its great, we will finish this over a pm?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: And heres another update!

 

 

 

pixelfoshizzel25vs.png

 

 

 

Thanks GreenPixels!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Hmm, Your awesome at shading but that sword looks odd, the hand is wrong and the face is outta place.

 

 

 

Other then that its great, we will finish this over a pm?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: And heres another update!

 

 

 

pixelfoshizzel25vs.png

 

 

 

Thanks GreenPixels!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

heh what are we gonna do for background?

~Michael

~My Second Year As a Tip-it'er

~Need a Sig?(Abstract, Grunge or Photomanip) Ask me.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

i did some shading and fixed up the hand:

 

 

 

pixelfoshizzel2vo7rh.png

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

whats the background gonna be?(u should use pillow-shading if ur not good with other types of shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No. YOU SHOULD NOT USE PILLOW SHADNG. For the love of god, there will never be a case were pillow shading is exceptable. Know what your talking about before you try to instruct someone, please.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

The shading on the latest version is a bit straight. If the light source is behind him, why is there highlighting on our side of him? There should be mostly shadow with highlighting around the edges.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The arm needs to be fixed up, you need to give him an elbow and distinguish between his arm and forearm. And maybe make his arms less chubby and more muscular.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's looking not too bad though. Oh and the sun / moon looks a bit like a weird lens flare. Keep it up.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Guest
This topic is now closed to further replies.
×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

By using this site, you agree to our Terms of Use.