still developing characters and the positions, its hard maintaining the style whilst thinking of how it's going to be animated, so please don't crit the drawing quality so much as how you think it looks so far, you think the end result would look eyecatching? pls tell me your thoughts. 8) .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

these select drawings where made especially for a print making class so theres no shade or great detail, it's been simplified from my original storyboards so I hope you keep tha in mind :P .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just crit pls :lol: . just posted for fun, no serious work atm.. till I get to the final design, consider these practices, plans, tests, wtever u call it. :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Ter

The expressions and views are best part, looks nice. :)

I didn't know they were girls for quite a while...Also, it's should have* not should of.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Flows nicely, but there's not much story right now.

worst thing i've ever seen in my life....seriously...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

.....jk....its a 8.6 out of 10

nice! :P

 

 

 

can u color that plx?

I didn't know they were girls for quite a while...Also, it's should have* not should of.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Flows nicely, but there's not much story right now.

 

 

 

I agree. Also, it should be damn instead of dam.

What is the story going to be? hmmmmm

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chicks fighting over boys in high school and some how a bit of friendship will slip in between the girls?

not too sure about the exact storyline, my Idea is several rebel teenagers who all stumble onto the same school, and they don't get along.. :lol: .. well much more to the storyline but im not gonna bore ya, those who said they look like guys need to know im still working on the style, if you read the first post you'll know that I persifically stated that these are quick copies of my original storyboard.. so the quality is less than norm, and the spelling is just how i've always wrote and said it, I don't think teenagers of that sort would speak fully perfect english, they aren't well spoken =P .. shh, thats my excuse and im sticking to it..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh and Ryan theres not much to the storyline because im using four frames of a storyboard originally only thumnail size on paper, enlarging them to A5 each and transfering it onto a printing plate to be cut and ready to print. Theres much more to it, goes onto a whole fight scene.. Its the best way to start an animation, with action..

spiffy... something different.. i like :P

something else, again not a work of art just a style practice. couldn't get the girl in the back middle right so I just gave up :x .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im trying to make it 'kim possible' styled.. Like ron stoppable ere. :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

plus something weird, ahh dont ask..the projects about crowds..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I really need to start drawing on paper more, cus im on the pc too much.. :cry: .. I'll post some better non cartoon related drawing later, need to show Godslayer im still a challenge to im..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(just to add, have you ever tried to draw a cartoon to be animated in an original style you've never done? im finding it a real challege so hopefully i'll pick up the pace and become more natural drawing em..)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lastly this, think I posted b4, just a weird style about crowds, no faces=strangers.. ooooooooo :shock: .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

love the last one.. looks like theres alot of emotion in that one :)

i love where your heading with it. and teh simplicity.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw, can you make me a tupac sig with the same pic b ut a different quote. pm me?