this is a pixel character of a basketball person that i made. i like it :) ill be making a background and stuff. but for the meantime, i need some constructive critism etc etc etc

For a plus side it really isnt too bad

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

things to work on,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

basketball is a bit to big

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

his right leg looks a bit strange in the postion you have it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the text 'boo' isnt at the right angle corresponding with the 3

the boos there for fun, im not gonna have it in the final product

I could only find two things really...the left foot that is planted on the groud looks a bit funny. I think making it a bit bigger and changing the angle so it looks like it it flat on the ground will fitx it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And as already state, the basketball is a bit too big.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Otherwise, great job on the pose. I see exactly what you're going for :P.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Moy bwayno. Or whatever lol. Mui bueno. I dono....

It looks like he's missing a leg, but other than that, it's pretty good. Muy bueno. :D

looks good as others said ball looks a bit big, apart from that i like it :)

thanks guys for the CCing, currently working on runescape buddy kits and doing some runescape stuff in game though

It looks like he's missing a leg, but other than that, it's pretty good. Muy bueno. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

erm-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Muy bueno?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You sound very un-fluent in spanish :lol:

 

It looks like he's missing a leg, but other than that, it's pretty good. Muy bueno. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

erm-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Muy bueno?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You sound very un-fluent in spanish :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

its actually a fluent use of the language... :? :roll:

 

 

 

muy bueno means excellent/very good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

dont judge.

good start....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

make everything a shade darker though.. on your next pixel or just use the darken option on photoshop

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the basketball is the right size for the kid if he is a younger player...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

whats with the boo right under his neck?