Animation by Ter - Cold Water

[terley]

Let me know whatcha think :)

 

 

A short animation about an old man called Charlie who's struggling to cope after the death of his wife, deteriorating more and more each day Charlie seeks a way to turn back the clock and be with his love once again.

 

A bit of teary one guys don't expect any slapstick :-?

 

Recently lost my Grandmother Monday 13th Sept, my Grandad's taking it really hard so this story just real for me. :sad:

[Nadril]

I really like it.

 

I don't know if it was on purpose but are all the people just being shadows supposed to just mean he isn't paying attention to anyone else after the death of his wife or was it just sort of a stylistic / easy way out? :P There are a few parts that are a little rough on the animation (mostly some of the arm movement). Other than that the only thing that really bothered me were some of the perspective shots. For example at 0:42 the perspective looks a bit off on the man.

 

Also near the end, the younger man running, is that supposed to be him having a flashback to the past or is that his son running when he heard the news? I guess it could work both ways too which is kind of interesting.

 

 

 

Good work though, and sorry to hear about your Grandmother :(.

 

 

ps: you still in uni or you graduate yet?

[Aussie_King]

WE LOVE YOU TERLEY

I'm glad you're still around :P

 

This is pretty fantastic. I didn't know you were this good. Ignoring all the obvious good bits I even like the backgrounds and extras that you've made. Like Nadril said, some of the perspective shots and arm movements are a bit off but overall I liked this a lot. Good work man :D

[Sam]

My condolences to to you and your family, I know how you must feeling.

 

 

EDIT: Thanks Felix ;)

[Pirate_Felix]

My condolences to to you are your family, I know how you must feeling.

Dude, that is like your first spelling mistake ever!

 

My condolences to you and your family, the animation was really intriguing. I think the music fitted quite well.

[Skully]

That was very good, sent the mood across well I think.

 

Heart goes out to you and your grandad man.

[Johannas]

Yeah that was awesome, nicely done video.

 

Reminds me of this...

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y_REnthQ1Bo&ob=av2n

[Shiny]

I think the whole thing had a wonderful atmosphere.

 

Indeed, the one point that bugged me was the thickness of the lines, I think they should be slightly thinner.