Need advice and c/c on this dragon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Very nice linework. i always struggle with linework. Only thing i can say is make sure it's shaded right and the wings seem a bit too symetricle.

Ok i've done some shading, Gotta work on some texture now and add some more details

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The lines on the face are too dark, and like you said, it needs some texture and highlights.

looks too blockish and symmetrical..... also doesnt look reptillian enough

put some more meat on the legs! It's a dragon, the legs come out of the body a tad bit more, other than the way you have it as just coming out and going straight down.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just a thing I drew in 1 minute to help you get what I am talking about. Doing this will stop the whole "boxy" look the dragon has, as if he is getting squished. Just trying to help though keep it up. Not to mention, get a righ ear for the poor fella!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep it up!

I see your point. More chunky legs and better texture shading and lines.

no no no no no... your problem isnt that they arent bulky enough, it's that theyre at wrong angles to how your pose should look... the legs should come out a bit to show the dragon's length... like so...[bad sketch, i know.]

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope this helps...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Adroit\\

it's entirly semetrical. If you saw a dragon in real life, are they symetrical on both sides?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fix that problem, and it will be much better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw, the shading, way too much bright red, you need some darks.

This is how you color a dragon:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Credit: St0ven. Rip and your a punk :wink:

Not as much angle as you've done but more.

This is how you color a dragon:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Credit: St0ven. Rip and your a punk :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

/agreed

it's entirly semetrical. If you saw a dragon in real life, are they symetrical on both sides?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fix that problem, and it will be much better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw, the shading, way too much bright red, you need some darks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ever seen a dragon before? As i was saying I used a reference I found somewhere. It's not that good but it's a start

 

it's entirly semetrical. If you saw a dragon in real life, are they symetrical on both sides?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fix that problem, and it will be much better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw, the shading, way too much bright red, you need some darks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ever seen a dragon before? As i was saying I used a reference I found somewhere. It's not that good but it's a start

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You know what I ment. Of course I haven't, but i've seen a lot of living things, a lot of animals, and none of them are exactly symetrical. Just because its a fantasy based character doesn't mean it shouldn't follow something. (and common, symetry doesn't look good for this type of thing).

I'm sure penty of people have seen dragons on Animal Planet. Komodo Dragons almost killed Steve Erwin once. :lol:

I'm sure penty of people have seen dragons on Animal Planet. Komodo Dragons almost killed Steve Erwin once. :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

FTW.

no no no no no... your problem isnt that they arent bulky enough, it's that theyre at wrong angles to how your pose should look... the legs should come out a bit to show the dragon's length... like so...[bad sketch, i know.]

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope this helps...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Adroit\\

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Um, have u ever seen dinosaur books and stuff....?

i reackon u shold make its belly a different colour to the scales. cause the belly hsan't got scales on it... a creamy/bone colour would look cool. gl!

 

 

 

RM