Update: i'm liking it now any comments are good comments

i say you make his chest come out of his body, to make him look he can bench a lot :P

what do you mean he looks pretty built to me but umm... ok thanks umm... anyone got a cool idea for a background

mind if i steal your pic for a sec, and show you what i mean?

lumby duelling on a summer day? :? an idea.. can make it nice and bright with a few other characters in the background..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

your guy's a bit skinny so such a bulge on his chest looks a bit outa place.. maybe if you gave him an average joe build it'd look better..

 

 

 

alright ter i just fixed that and lumy dueling is rsc only :( lol please think of a kool place in rs2 hee hee and thanks for the tips

ehh no he doesn't look well bullt..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

he looks skiny.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the lines on his body looks like scrimble rather than muscles.. I am sure you can find plenty of reference everywhere on google :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

since they want to sqeeze money out of the fat Americans (no offence but that is the truth....)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

to make him look more like a man, make his shoulder wider....you get the idea of how a woman looks bad with a wide shoulder..?

i made his arms lil bigger... chest more plump, and i gave him bigger shoulders.... i dunno this is what i wouldve done...

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT -- soz pic is fixed

now that just looks ridiculous :lol: :lol: :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just cause he's drawing a guy, don't asume he has to be in the legue of strongest man in the world.. just do whatever you thinks best bam. don't listen to us :wink:

thanks krypt hope you don't mind that i used ur fixings lol and anyone got suggestions on the legs are they fine or what?

now that just looks ridiculous :lol: :lol: :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just cause he's drawing a guy, don't asume he has to be in the legue of strongest man in the world.. just do whatever you thinks best bam. don't listen to us :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Who said i was assuming he should be the strongest man in the world? I dont care what anyone says, a bulking looking person looks better than a scrawny lil guy that he had before... and im not telling him what do to... its advise! and he liked it! so i dont see where you stick yourself in.. :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PS - Bam use it if you wish..

i liked the chest and abs not the arms way way to bulky so i just used his abs and fixing arms :) thanks terely by the way can you or someone draw an outline of an ice barrage i can't seem to get it... if thats not asking to much

soz, i cant ice barrage...

thats ok working on another buy i think i might change the anchients into a god spell or something because there's alot going on lol i'll post once i finish this guy

If he's going to have manbreasts, at least don't make them saggy. :shock:

ahaha godslayer i'll fix that i laughed too hahaha

kryptic u made him look like he had huge jugs.........no offense

hope this helps a bit.. (hope you dont mind, but i removed the sample incase you decided to use this...) ill pm u the unsampled version, but ill post the sampled version here so others can see, but cant rip easily :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway, this is what id do with it... i agree with terley - the char shouldnt look too muscly (i think i did too much muscle) but he should have more muscle than what youve currently got. anyway-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

UPDATE:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyone like..!?!

i dont hate it, but i still think the arms and shoulders should look a bit bigger... they just look like logs to me... and thats fine if you wanna that way, but i recommed otherwise

alright working on his arms and legs anything else?

his facial expression seems laid-back and kinda happy.... hes ice barraging and cracking his whip.. this takes skill, so i think he should have a nobel looking expression.. not nessecarily mad or anything... but nobel and warrior like.... AGRESSIVE! AGRESSIVE!

i tried to fix his muscles..this is just an example, i know its not perfect

 

 

 

 

 

 

the guy on the far left is in an impossible position....

 

 

 

the one on the far right looks odd right now too

 

 

 

im guessing the legs are just a guide right now.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and your proportions are quite off....and your heads are circles....dont mix realism with cartoonism...it doesnt look good...i know the head i drew sucks...it was the circle tool, ut imo it still looks better

i tried to fix his muscles..this is just an example, i know its not perfect

 

 

 

 

 

 

the guy on the far left is in an impossible position....

 

 

 

the one on the far right looks odd right now too

 

 

 

im guessing the legs are just a guide right now.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and your proportions are quite off....and your heads are circles....dont mix realism with cartoonism...it doesnt look good...i know the head i drew sucks...it was the circle tool, ut imo it still looks better

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

very nice

the guy on the left has no hands thats why he looks oddly postioned i love the arm but its to far down and could you redo it with the same postion as mine just more bulky please?