Hey guys this is a piece i've been woking on, let me know what you guys thnik. Its for the deviant art contest but ill be adding the updated version after school, but this is it without text

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ok well heres a brighter version **update**

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr

lol verry cool but this reminds me of lps work

Nice, but i dont particularly like the embossed hearts in the backround. The theme seems to be (well besides love) a sort of magical sparkly setting, the glossy hears dont fit to me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Great job, good luck in the contst.

yeah I agree, i think i might work on it and take them out when i get home. It is sort of like lps because i liked his style and wanted to try something different. I changed it more to fit my own style aswell though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr

Very nice. :D

all good and great, cept the Photoshop *Embossing.. (sp?)

lol got home and fell asleep after a long day of sleeping at school so im just posting the version with text.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks guys,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr

I dont like the two people kissing, I don't think you should have the gratient (sp) in there. Instead, keep the white outline, and put a ton of hearts or something in it?

too dark for v-day

hmm maybe i will lighten it up then, its just means more to me then just a contest its for someone i care for and they like darker colors too. I might make a brighter version and post it as well

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr

It's a nice piece but a bit too dark for Valentine's Day imo.

k lol tomorrow ill change it and make it much lighter :) thanks for comments everyone. any more c/c?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

jlr

dont make it alot lighter, just the heart in the middle needs some brightening, the two dark ends are too extreme.

let me know if its n e better :)

ah much better! it loks kinda odd though were there are apparent gaps in the brushes in the bg