teenageloser33 Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 Update: Update 2: So I decided to start this WIP, going to be holding a magic bow in his extended hand it's going to be melting, through, and turning into GP. Not sure on the background, I'll have to think about that. What ya think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 hmm, muscles look a bit too bulgy when u colour it make them more subtle good job so far tho, i'd like to see how the melting bow turns out keep us posted :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linktrigger Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 Well the nose is messing with me. Also, the staff looks kind of sharp. I don't know if you purposely made the shaft of it like that, but make the line smoother or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 nose seems a bit big, and arms a but long thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted February 16, 2006 Author Share Posted February 16, 2006 Well the staff I already extended down, and it'll be smoother when I go through and shade and do some manual AA, the arm that coming towards you needs to seem longer cause it's coming out forward. But I get what you're saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureleader18 Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 very nice teenage :D Looks really good, the only thing i see wrong to me is the nose. the staff is fixed witch is good :) cant wait till you do with this :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxxShade Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 Really cool idea. I think the only thing you need to work on is the nose it's kinda like a Simpson's nose :P . I can't wait to see it finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boogie Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 Update: So I decided to start this WIP, going to be holding a magic bow in his extended hand it's going to be melting, through, and turning into GP. Not sure on the background, I'll have to think about that. What ya think? That's some nice little lineart you got there. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted February 16, 2006 Author Share Posted February 16, 2006 What do you think about for the background, any ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enk Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 Backround , hmmm edge bank? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureleader18 Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 What do you think about for the background, any ideas? does it have to be rs related? if not i still think up something for u that is rs related Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted February 16, 2006 Author Share Posted February 16, 2006 Doesn't matter tbh, but something that is not Edgeville bank. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 liking it so far, muscles and front hand seem to have issues, but at a guess I'd say tht'd clear up with shading. Can't wait to see finished result Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godslayer Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 His arms are unnaturaly large. Shorten those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdprs Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 The staff would look better longer, like if the staff head was behind his head, you know.. And yeah, arms too long. Fix those things. Put a cool background and itll be awsome http://jdpr.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureleader18 Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 Doesn't matter tbh, but something that is not Edgeville bank. heh yeait wont be about that :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XforswornX Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 i like it a lot :D now just give it some color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted February 19, 2006 Author Share Posted February 19, 2006 Can't post progress for the next couple days, family stuff. Thanks for the comments guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted February 23, 2006 Author Share Posted February 23, 2006 So a small and tiny update for what I'm looking at for a background, gonna have people in the background going about there lives, at market stalls and what not. Still quite a bit of work to do as you can see, anything specific you'd guys like to see in there? I'm up for adding some stuff you guys would like to see. Edit: I know the buildings look jaggy in the back but that's cause some come out a bit further then the others. Don't want it being monotonous and repetative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pink Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 Looks great, but theres like those spots on his arms... :? His left arm looks a bit strange around the elbow, it looks too thin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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