Still WIP.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

there it is, i paid attention to what has been said to other people and a few tutorials on the internet.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway i was wondering what to do with the stone platform the wizard is standing on...

*Gets a Scimitar and slashes of magic's balls.... and hang them around the pixel* Okay....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GREAT! For your first sig. Nicelt done mountain but I don't like the volacano it looks titled ready to spill on the nice grass you made :9. Good Line work but you should try more colour.... GREAT! 6.5/10

*ABUSE* *ABUSE* *ABUSE*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not really, it's nice but you should make the platform he's standing on more obvious, or add trees/ small houses on the grass on either side to show that he's high up, at the moment it looks like hes just on a path with bad perspective :shock: . The mountains are cool, but you should add dark silhouettes of other mountains in the background, and the character is kinda short. It's pretty different to other peoples first, a more unique idea. GJ

hey :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not bad for a first, i have no idea what u can do on the platform thing to :o

 

 

 

just saying, i think the mountains n that look good but :

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-the shading under the montains look weird, im not sure but i think maybe that part shud just be solid? i dunno

 

 

 

-the contrast in the sky colouts is a bit too big and a bit immediat i think and the shading looks weird there aswell :o

 

 

 

-maybe add more to the background eg: trees, other mountains, :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hope that advice helps, although i cant pixel at all so i am probably rong :s

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

gl pixeling :) its a good first

nothin' like a pixel to get the replies roling in is there lol. hehe

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, onto the comments. Thankyou all, I think the main changes will be to stick a few huoses and other things in on the plain below. Stick some dark sillhouettes of backgrounds behind the main mountains. And add some texture/rocks skulls dead things yes got it. I'm gonna try leaving sort of a wake of slain monsters behind the guy as if he has thought his way through an army of enemies. I love you guys. And add trees and lower the contrast between the two sections of sky.

*rabble rabble rabble* :evil:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

6/10, some bits look too blank but for a first u deserve a 6.. u at least tried, some people just rush it.

 

 

 

Still WIP.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

there it is, i paid attention to what has been said to other people and a few tutorials on the internet.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway i was wondering what to do with the stone platform the wizard is standing on...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Pretty good for a first but it's plain. The volcano's perspective is really weird too and some parts are empty, 7/10

Uhhh, its alright, but id say, stick to abstarct, your wicked at that

^^hehe lol thankyou.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also thanks for the comments, i'm gonna add some more stuff tommorow i think.

here's an update version of the sig with a few changes, anyone got any tips on texturing the rock thing he is standing on.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its acually not bad, just fix the mountins, there badly textures and out of shae, maybe make the mage taller, and add some stuff on the forground, or just everywhere:P Its plain, but i guess it is wip, so good luck with it

cant you detail the bown area?