My first go, any comments welcome.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

IMG tags added. ~misterxman

Pink hair and green goo on the wall/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Is the mage supposed to be a girl?

yes mage is a girl, nd my character has pink hair

Change the wall and skin color

Kicks jdprs in the head

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its really good for your first try Tashnae :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Whos the handsome guy on the left?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-xx-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Valor

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Ps. This pic is not wierd, we are engaged irl)

 

 

 

ok i changed background nd skin colour what you reckon?

looks much better :D

looks gd tashnae.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

maybe try something a lil more complex next time but very nice for yur first attempt.

Make the skin a bit darker or the wall a bit darker...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And the staff is too short..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~komodo

Everything is incredibly flat and 2D.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://www.spritart.com Look up some of their tutorials, mostly on Dithering and AA.

Looks a lil wired, but 7/10 It looks a lil cool tho

thats pretty god for ur 1st attempt 7/10

 

 

 

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