Puppet Master

[EP]

here it is

 

first thing up on dA in almost exactly 3 months, really should put more crap up for others to comment on. Anyways rate/cc/whatever, also say if it should go in a different part of dA then surreal, really wasnt sure where to put it.

 

 

 

-ep

[Serenity]

Pretty kool but i dont really like it..

[EP]

Could you post a reason why you don't like it? Or why it's "kool"? So that I know in the future.

[woopidoo2]

yea nice, whats dA??

 

 

 

good job :wink:

[fitzztif]

im guessing da is deviant art

[Sy_Accursed]

Nice

 

 

 

The finger nails seem a bit dark/white

 

 

 

It seems to have a somewhat religious theme, but is kind of sterotyped. Would be interesting to see if you could develop the whole religious type imagary theme into something more unusual

[YodaIsAHobo]

Yeah i agree. Although i do think you could have some animation. :D

 

I don't have any suggestions though.

 

Possibly like a mediorite coming in and being absorbed????? I donnu think man think. :?

[EP]

Thanks for the replies, not really sure what else i could add to it atm if anything, (there was one thing but it doesn't change much).

 

 

 

Paw, i have plenty of unusual religous imagery, most of it is buried deep in my computer though. When i made this i wasn't necessarily thinking of religion (well kinda), it represents a controlling group, which personally i feel religions would fall under, but it also shows the government (live in america => Patriot act, wiretaps, etc) with their hand in everything.

 

 

 

Any comments on the planet?

[Punc]

The fingertips are too much contrast, I think it would be better if you lighten the pink on the nails. The rest is really good. Loving the eath :D

[Sy_Accursed]

Thanks for the replies, not really sure what else i could add to it atm if anything, (there was one thing but it doesn't change much).

 

 

 

Paw, i have plenty of unusual religous imagery, most of it is buried deep in my computer though. When i made this i wasn't necessarily thinking of religion (well kinda), it represents a controlling group, which personally i feel religions would fall under, but it also shows the government (live in america => Patriot act, wiretaps, etc) with their hand in everything.

 

 

 

Any comments on the planet?

 

 

 

dun really known wat to say about the planet its not like OMG WOW STOP THE RPESS ITS RTHE NEW PICASSO and its not bad

 

 

 

I must say though me and you seem to somewhat share some view points. It has not come out throuhg my art as of yet, but that theme of control linking into governments etc is a major connecting theme within my books and is a large factor within the finale if I ever get there. Anyway you'll understand if I ever get published and you read em

 

 

 

But about the other works lol, gr8 minds think alike. Using 1 theme over multiple things can be helpful developing further in skills as you are repating the same type of thing

 

 

 

anyway I am hungry and am sounding smart for once, muts go eat so I can come acorss as stupid once more

[Jdprs]

Its like, the metallica album cover, minus the graves and plus the earth:P

 

 

 

Pretty nice anyway, but the fingernail tips are too white

[EP]

after you mentioned the metallica album i looked for master of puppets and you are right there are hands in each cornor, never noticed them before, then again I think i only saw the cover once when i took the cd out when my bro got it.

 

 

 

Yea for next time, or if i come up with something more for this, i should probably yellow the fingernails a bit, as most people seem to notice that between dif forums and people i have asked.

[Jdprs]

Make them pinker as apposed to yellower

[EP]

i meant the tips of the fingernails, yellower implies age, the nail itself i was going to lighten up a bit so pinker it is. I have somelthing i drew a year ago making a jab at police and donuts that im planning on outlining coloring and putting up so i'll prob work on that before doing too many changes to this. Still would like to hear more ideas on what needs to be changed so i can do alot at once to it for comparisons.

[gorufriders]

wow thats really nice! could i use as a sig?

[xxbamxx]

its pretty cool.

 

i think you should make the orbit and the hands move like a puppet.

 

so when the left hands moves the earths moves with it and so on.

 

that would look sweet and i think you should make the earth glow a tiny bit.