April 4, 200620 yr This is my first ever pixil "sig", i made it way to high, so i had to crop alot of the real sig. But this was fun, i think i found a new hobby. Always good to hear c/c, so i can get another opinion. :P ~~Vaalron
April 4, 200620 yr pretty good for first "sig" lol. i would clean the lines and shade. other than that its pretty good. u hav a decent idea of anatomy. jav "Let your feelings be like that of a monkey in a pinata, hiding inside with the candy hoping that the kids don't break through with the stick."
April 4, 200620 yr You'll improve gradually as you keep tinkering with your pixels and learn techniques.
April 4, 200620 yr clean up your lines, make your shading better, the only ok thing is the dragonhide thing is the pants. his shoes look like socks, define the line that makes it flat on the surface, SHADE BETTER! axeraider70.deviantART.com
April 4, 200620 yr Clean lines, shade better, fix the border, fix the shoes, and fix the leg that its a bit wierd, but only a bit.... ~komodo
April 4, 200620 yr Clean the lines, and shade, and his closed eye is hella messed up, alright for a 1st attempt http://jdpr.deviantart.com/
April 4, 200620 yr First attempt or not, I'm going to be harsh. How can you be satisfied with this piece at all? It would take a blind man to be even consinderably satisified with it and he'd then say it was horrible when you described it. You desperately need to work on your anatomy, don't make your pieces so large. Pixeling is not meant to cover a huge area. The anatomy is just horrible over all, I don't remember anyones head being the shape of a gigantic grapefruit. People do not have fat puggy, non defined arms. I don't care if the person is fat or not, there is definition and some sort of tone in there. Which brings me to my next point, no shading! You put absolutely no shading into this piece. Was it because you didn't know how or just to lazy? Regardless, you need to learn... FAST. That's what makes a pixel piece is it's shading and looks of realism. And yours is by no means real in any shape, way, or form. Go back to the drawing bored, learn anatomy, shading, and controling your canvas size.
April 4, 200620 yr learn anatomy, shading, and controling your canvas size There you go, the main things to work on, put someone time into it, alot more time!!! He is being a bit harsh, but hes giving you some good advice Looks here: http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=407286&start=0 For more tips, its a great tutorial for begginers, also, im interested, are you any good at drawing on paper? Ya know, with a pencil? http://jdpr.deviantart.com/
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