heres the latest:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The first two is just the render but on the second one i tried a little brushing... anyways rate them, give some comments, and let me know which one you like best :wink:

I like the middle one best.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

9/10 for what they are, but that style isnt really the thing i like,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

==ice==

1 is awsome 10/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2 is ok 9/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3 is ok but with the text it dosent blend in it looks like the letters were like copied and pasted not that im saying it was just thats what it looks like

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10

i like the first one-

 

 

 

it looks very techy but also clean and smooth

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and if you make the boarder with black and a white it will look better for people using the sub black

i like top the best too. its clean.

thanks for the comments

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i like the first one-

 

 

 

it looks very techy but also clean and smooth

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and if you make the boarder with black and a white it will look better for people using the sub black

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

exaft what do you mean by making the border with black and a white?

like have the ouside boarder black then have an inside boarder thats white

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

or the other way around if you prefer but that doesnt look as good in my opinion

oh i see, so the border is more visible

There all nice, the bottom one would be good, but they all scream out for color! :P Definetly add some color to them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7/10 for them all. Add color, linework, and a bit more brushing and I think they would look good :wink:

1 10/10 cuz of the more detail

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2 9/10 not much detail

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3 8/10 :\

There all nice, the bottom one would be good, but they all scream out for color! :P Definetly add some color to them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7/10 for them all. Add color, linework, and a bit more brushing and I think they would look good :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks i'm liking the bottom one too (since it took more time and i'm quite satisfied with my brushing for once), the last one was originally 300x150... i thought it would be easier to work with but then i thought it was too empty and i was bored with my linework style so i just threw it out :? hmm as for color how do you think i should add it? more brushing with a different color maybe?

 

There all nice, the bottom one would be good, but they all scream out for color! :P Definetly add some color to them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7/10 for them all. Add color, linework, and a bit more brushing and I think they would look good :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks i'm liking the bottom one too (since it took more time and i'm quite satisfied with my brushing for once), the last one was originally 300x150... i thought it would be easier to work with but then i thought it was too empty and i was bored with my linework style so i just threw it out :? hmm as for color how do you think i should add it? more brushing with a different color maybe?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hmm, I think the renders would look very nice in a blue. As for brushing, what I would do is try some mellower colors, that go good with blue. Maybe a light pink, or lighter blue, or heck, just about anything :P experiment :wink: Just do a base color layer and work off of that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Although since it is a Bryce abstract, you might want to have a sharper contrast, as peices in bryce go good with sharp colors and bright contrasts rather than subtle and smooth. Try whichever :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

any better? what do you think about the brushed one should i emphasize the new brushing a bit more or is it too much?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

use levels on that one to make it brighter and i think it would be pretty nice

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but dont use brightness and contrast that would make it look bad

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh and do the boarder i said when its done i think it will work well

do you mean increase opacity levels?

you use photoshop or paintshop?

photoshop

image-> adjustments-> levels

 

 

 

then play with the settings till it looks nice

hmm well i tried adjusting the levels but it's not doing much for me :? maybe i'm doing it wrong

There all nice, the bottom one would be good, but they all scream out for color! :P Definetly add some color to them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't really agree on that...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like the middle one best.

i like the top 1 best, 9/10.

 

 

 

middle 1 isn't very interesting, 7/10.

First one's pretty cool