Well, here we go, the wip version of the 700x1200 abstract Im making..

 

 

 

Im not satisfied with it yet, the top doesnt work for me..

 

 

 

The background brushing needs quite some work too..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://www.vissersuden.nl/mathijs/visign/img/images/biomechanical2.png Warning big file (500kb)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Any comments or tips to improve it?

What's with the white pixel outlines? Totally killing the could-be good image...

its really good, but whats up with the dots around it, Its kinda weird, maybe its just my computer or somethin.

What's with the white pixel outlines? Totally killing the could-be good image...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hummz, I dont see what you mean :? Could you specify where you see white outlines? Could be either yours or my computer :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Vlad, thanks for the comment, but again, I dont see any white dots :?

http://img3.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img3&image=dempic001.jpg

 

 

 

this is what i see

WHAT THE..?! :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hmmz, Ryan, is that what you mean too?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I see it normal, without the dots :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hummz, Ill try re-uploading later..

i see it with the dots too :/

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it still looks really good, can't say anything for sure yet. really waiting for a dotless version.

Hmmz, re-exported it, hope this works :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://www.vissersuden.nl/mathijs/visign/img/images/biomechanical2.png

works fine for me now :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

looks really good in my eyes, except for the lines in the left of the red parts. imo there is also too much space in the top of it. though you said your not satisfied with it yet, so im assuming your gonna put something there.

i dn't like the lines on his leg. .other than that i think its well done :)

Thanks :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Any mroe comments on this one?

Looks neat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's a bit too blurry, methinks. I think it should be sharper around the center of the biomech.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The font needs anti-aliasing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Still, very nice. :D

Yeah, I saw what vlad saw too. New version looks great. Excellent work :!:

yea new version is kick [wagon] dude, it works fine now. gj!!

Looks amazing :) great work, once again Demented. GJ!

Hmm, I love the color choice :D Its an overall good peice, you can tell it was made by you without your name being there :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The little flying bits/strokes kill it for me though. It creates friction with the whole peice. Takes away from an otherwise flawless flow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10, fix that and maybe add a bit more color, maybe some linework around your name, and for god sakes, use a different font!!!! :P :P :D :lol:

Hmm, I love the color choice :D Its an overall good peice, you can tell it was made by you without your name being there :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The little flying bits/strokes kill it for me though. It creates friction with the whole peice. Takes away from an otherwise flawless flow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10, fix that and maybe add a bit more color, maybe some linework around your name, and for god sakes, use a different font!!!! :P :P :D :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like that one :cry: Its actually a new one..meh..

 

 

 

Yeah. I was thinking of adding some more colour to it, but I cant seem to find the right spots..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the comments everyone..

 

 

 

Oh, and shaw, the font is anti-aliased :?

 

Hmm, I love the color choice :D Its an overall good peice, you can tell it was made by you without your name being there :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The little flying bits/strokes kill it for me though. It creates friction with the whole peice. Takes away from an otherwise flawless flow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10, fix that and maybe add a bit more color, maybe some linework around your name, and for god sakes, use a different font!!!! :P :P :D :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like that one :cry: Its actually a new one..meh..

 

 

 

Yeah. I was thinking of adding some more colour to it, but I cant seem to find the right spots..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the comments everyone..

 

 

 

Oh, and shaw, the font is anti-aliased :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lol, that looks like the same font youve used on all your sigs :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for color spots, the wings. Make little slivers of color in them, not sure what would go though. Maybe a lighter blue, and some bits of purple highlights. Also near the top, theres a brushing that leads into the biomech, that could use color streaks to liven it up ;)

It looks like it, bit its a bit more roundish :P

Holy crap dude, i can't even begin to imagine how you got this done :P If you didn't submit on devart you should :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, kick wagon Desgin there :D

Thanks :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I already submitted it to devart ;)

http://www.vissersuden.nl/mathijs/visign/img/images/biomechanical2.png Warning big file (500kb)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Holy *

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That is wicked, the background may still be a bit dark but other than that :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Is it just me or does that look like a mechanical sea horse? or should i get more sleep? :lol:

Wow, Demented, that's just incredible. :shock: :P What else can I say but awesome work, man. :D

 

 

 

Is it just me or does that look like a mechanical sea horse? or should i get more sleep? :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lol, your right, it does kinda look like that :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the comments :D