Prolouge: Monastry

 

 

 

I sat in a monastry looking around. There was a small fire on theo other side. I looked to my right and saw a door. I looked to my left and saw the Choas later. A smaller version though. I looked though a window on the other side of the Monastry and then Saw more snow coming down.

 

 

 

One week ago I Decided to find my Girl Friend, who had gotton lost in the Wilderness. Then it began. Now I was here, Wrapped up in a makeshift Blanket Given to me by one of theMonks tha had Found me. I Started to walk over to the fire. I then stubbed my toe! It didnt hurt to bad thoguh. The cold made it feel like a little [puncture].

 

 

 

I started to add some oak logs to the fireplace. It began to get warmer! I put my hands closer to it Trying not to burn it.

 

 

 

The door to the Monastry then creaked open as a shadowy figure began to come inside! I Leapt to my feet and Took out my Oak bow. I got three arrows from the Quiver on my back.

 

 

 

"dont move!" I said to the figure.

 

"why? I could never hurt you!" It said.

 

"Then close the door." I replied

 

"Noob." He said. That anger came out of me! I was level 29! I was not about to get teased by this guy! I let go of two of the Arrows.

 

"Gahh!" One of te bows hit the figure. He slumped to the ground. He was hit in the hand.

 

"dont make me mad!" I was enraged by this noob's atitude.

 

 

 

He then came further into the light so that I could see him better. He Had a full helmet on, with ragety clothes. his foot was soaked with blood. I had no symathy for him thoguh.

 

 

 

"Sit down." He said to me, as if he thought I was going to obey.

 

"Your foot needs tending to. until then Ill just watch you to make sure you dont get out of control." he smiled at this.

 

"why dont yo tell me why your up here? Then i'll tell you my story."

 

 

 

I sat down and then relaxed.

mildly interesing.

 

 

 

isnt there a seperate forum for stuff like this?

If you're gonna write a story please, pretty please get rid of all the typos, spelling and grammatical errors, so we can at least read it.

ok story, bad grammer and spelling though...plus wrong forum. http://forum.tip.it/viewforum.php?f=11

a good read kinda 5/10 ;)

yea maybe wrong posting in wrong forum but i thought wernet a bad story :D

dont start every other sentence with I, the effect you wanted to create didnt work... at all.

 

he, he, his I.... start with other words and get more detailed, when you saw the figure, what could you see how did you feel? was his smile just a smile or did he glance at you too... and so on and so on

This should be posted in varrock library.

Chapter 1: Burning villiage

 

 

 

"I think ill start out by telling you Where the first Place Ive been is."

 

I said to the stranger.

 

 

 

 

 

I was walking through the Wilderness, keeping my gaurd up. It was raining. I looked up at the Clouds and couldn't see anything for miles. Then I took a right and started to walk east. Eventually I came to a villiage. I decided to investigate. I walked over to the Town. It was empty.

 

 

 

I then swmelled something weird. Smoke. I ran though the samll town and then sawa bonfire raging over half the town. Luckily There was no people around.In the smoke a figure was coming torwards me. I then Realized that a potential Pker coming!

 

 

 

I took out my bow and arrows and then fired! The Figure slumped to the ground with a torch in its hand.

 

 

 

"Hey what happended!?" a voice said.

 

"I dont know! Cari isnt moving!" something else, a femine voice replied.

 

I ran over and behind one of the buildings.

 

 

 

They stepped out of the Smoke so I could see them more clearly now. One of them, the dead one was a boy with no armour on. The other ones were a girl and another boy. They all had no armour, but I knew better.It was a ploy to lure out others.

 

 

 

I thought about doing to them What I ddi to the other, but There were most likely other around the area of the burning village. I then decided to run. I crept to my knees and then began crawling back to the mountin.

 

 

 

"FREEZE!" One of them called. I froze in terror. I looked up and then saw that a sword was right to my nose.

Chapter 2: MassPkers

 

 

 

I slumped to the ground hardly breathing. The Man was standing over me. His sword was made out of rune ore! did he have to kill someone for that? or was it his wealth level!? Whatever it was I needed to know.

 

 

 

Hey uh whred you get that sword?" I asked.

 

"Uh It was a gift? Yeah! It was a gift from my friend!" The man said quizically.

 

"Well then..." I said. I was formulating a plan! Although I would need more people. I needed a diversion!

 

 

 

I got up with my hands over my head. IT started to rain. In my favor.

 

 

 

 

 

Malissia was a fairly tall woman. She had million coins , and she carried it all around iwth her. She was a pker, a mass killer.Malissia had slayed litterally 10,000 souls with her sword, the Bloodbanger.The sword was said to have been able to not stab anything yet kill the opponet. She was the man's accompliace, but he wanted himself called "The man." She knew something was up. She started to walk over to where The Man ran off to.

 

 

 

I Quickly took out a dagger and then threw it at the man! The man saw it! He then treid to dodge it. He fell on the ground in pain. A fairly tall woman then came over. She looked down at the sobbing Man. She then took out some nails. She threw them at me!My armour kdeflected some of them but one of them came close to my right arm.

 

 

 

The woman saw that thre was blood From my arm. It hurt like her nails were digging into my flesh!

 

 

 

"Hey boy! Wanna know why Im a mass murderour?" She said to me.

 

"Because your to ugly to get a job?" I joked.

 

"No. Because I have nothing better to do than kill noobs tha come into my path!" She now looked angered! THis could feed her lust for battle if she was a pker!

 

 

 

I took out my helmet and put it on. Tihs was most likely gonna be serious.

Umm... it's ok. Could be more detailed...I won't say more until you correct the spelling, though. Good luck with that,

 

 

 

Issy,