Ok ive been very bored, so I decided to brush up on my shading, what better way to start it off than with a face? so go ahead rate, c/c... all that jazz....and dont comment on the ear ring..i dunno why its there :?

 

 

 

Pretty good but a few things:

 

 

 

1. The face is too ovular (oval?). The top is ok but most people have more angled chins

 

 

 

2. The ears look good as far as size, but the changes aren't quite smooth and it looks like there are a lot of right angles.

 

 

 

3. The shading is in the right places but there's too much contrast between colors, especially around the chin and lips

 

 

 

4. Some random looking lines like between his eyebrows and beside his mouth (furrows and dimple?). Try making them with shading instead of black lines

 

 

 

If you want a rating 4/10: A little below average.

Flat eyebrows?

 

 

 

No shading/highlight on the middle of the nose.

 

 

 

Saggy old person neck

 

 

 

BLACK LINES - CARTOONY - GET RID OF THEM!

 

 

 

Ovular head, chin wrong shape.

 

 

 

Totally clean bald head? Hmmm...

 

 

 

Ears are a little too high up and too short

 

 

 

No lips - flat mouth.

 

 

 

Eyes wrong shape. Should be more almond shaped.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry if it all seems negative, but with these C/C threads I tend to point out the bad things, not the good.

look at a picture of a face u will see alot of things diferent

 

 

 

like shape of head

 

position of eyes, ears, moouth chin eyebrow

 

neck is quite good but i need to keep in mind that it starts from underneed the ear then so it should be wider.. and numbers of other anatomy mistakes ...

 

also tri looking up the Phi-mask u will be suprised how much the number phi ( golden number ; 1.618 0339 887...) has to do with face proportions

 

would make the eyse smaller

 

and put more contrast into your sig.

 

 

 

 

 

happy pixeling :wink:

oval tool for the head??

 

 

 

ears are flat to the side... no depth shadeing is ok but i don't see any dithering...

Flat eyebrows, oval face, blck outlines, too small ears, ears are to high.

 

All this are the bads, fix thse and it will look really better :)

okie dokie, thanks for the comments, I wasnet really that worried with the shape, just trying to get back in the groove of shading, Im much better at shaidng than pixling, And this is really jsut to hlp me drawing irl. Ill tyr and fix it eventually.....