June 13, 200620 yr Ok so this is my first attempt a pixel sig :oops: hoping I will get better with practice. The white thing in the middle is supposed to be a nappy, or 'diaper' for you Americans, I know the shape of this needs major changing, but I am stuck for ideas on how to change it. Also I know the colours and positions on the lights aren't too great, but I find them really hard to do so I'm going to leave them. Any other tips on how to improve, or if you want to have a go at redoing the sig, just post here :)
June 13, 200620 yr Lol, cool idea :lol: :lol: The diaper looks like a cake tin :oops: Make the circle at the top less width and make it a tad longer I think. The floor and curtains look very good, so does the text. Good job for a first pixel :shock:
June 13, 200620 yr I like it, I can tell your going for thew cartony style, normaley I don't like cartonny pixels but this one caught my eye You can't ever find a place that's nice and peaceful, because there isn't any. You may think there is, but once you get there, when you're not looking, somebody'll sneak up and write "(bleep) you" right under your nose. Try it sometime. I think, even, if I ever die, and they stick me in a cemetery, and I have a tombstone and all, it'll say "Holden Caulfield" on it, and then what year I was born and what year I died, and then right under that it'll say "(bleep) you."
June 13, 200620 yr Work on the lights. Those things look lie c**p. And the grey wall on the back... It looks too simple. Meow?
June 14, 200620 yr ok well thanks for the comments guys :D , but silu: rate dont hate! You wanted to know how to improve it. That's what i did. Meow?
June 14, 200620 yr No, you said it looked like crap, not how to improve it. I quite like the lights, though, yes, the nappy needs work. Go search one on Google and use it as a reference.
June 14, 200620 yr It is VERY VERY good for a first, you actually have shading+good linework, the only thing htat is weird is the diper :)
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