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Injection of peace, a new work.

cool 8/10 well done

Thanks - That was alot of a test, and now i'm trying real hard on a new more 'serene' one.

 

 

 

Ty for rating :)

7.5/10 i like the colors!

hmm, it's abit too much for me...like every single part of it wants to be looked at all the time :D hehe, or something, better with something that catches and then the rest is just sweet, ok? now do it!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hehe :D

Reminds me of the arura borialis, however you spell it.

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I've just finished on a piece i've named "Injection of peace"

 

 

 

When you see it, i hope you realise why its such a contrast of words.

 

 

 

But this is definately gonna take me on a new road of sig-making.

 

 

 

I'll post it tomorrow when i finish it.

its not bad, but i needs a lil more work

Very bland. The colors dont really match. No focal or real flow. You had some sort of flow to it, but it was stopped by that white explosion thing. The font is bad. Very empty and plain.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok, now that the harsh is out of the way, its nice for a first. You started to have something from the right side to the middle, that looks almost like clouds, but that white explision in the odd colors ruined it. Also, adding linework never hurts, just make sure its very subtle. Keep trying, you'll get the hang soon :wink:

Thanks for the honor :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The problem is, that it looks too much smudged. A bit like my a-10 signature explosion.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

To help things seem more detailed and less blur I usually start my sigs with 1000x1000 canvas and scale thing radically.

8/10 it's good. I know I couldn't do it.

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Injection of peace was a little more "practiced" Please Rate again

bump please.

you should have a sort of peace sign in the middle, like the 2 fingers? or the cross or something, just kinda moved out of the picture if you know whati mean.

Injection is much cooler already. Never done any abstract brushing, so I'm not that eligible to give pointers.

7.5/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nice work you got there

Thx - I'm going to try and fix up injection a bit more, some places are a bit rough i noticed so i'll try and fix them by tomorrow, then i'll post the edited one tomoro and hopefully more people can rate.

bump

Just noticed..there is no need to (usually) save brushed work as a gif, since they have slowly changing colors (great for jpg to hack the filesize down). The first one shows some gif dithering and dithering is ugly :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm pretty sure that a sig of that size can be saved in 100% jpeg. Try it to remove the dither.

Ah - Ok I didn't know that. And yeah i had noticed they looked muuuch lower quality than in PSD format

 

 

 

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Thats JPG...I made it high quality as so its just under the board limits - Uhm, Few changes i made as well