Ianw77 Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 Here it is please give me some tips and such before I attempt coloring it. http:// 1st Attempt at coloring + shading :oops: Super Huge Wrist Hurts Update OMFG I THINK I'M DONE!!! \ \ \ \ \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalbatorix Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 lol u have no nose and nice little paralleogram quadrilateral mouth :P lol other than that nice, cool stats Seling 45548 Airs PM if u want to buy some! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knives669 Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 The eyes are uneven and the mouth needs to be more rounded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ianw77 Posted July 31, 2006 Author Share Posted July 31, 2006 Wow I didn't get ripped apart. \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 *rips you up and feeds you to a rabid squirrel* *the squirrel then tears you apart further and feed you to his pet wolverine* *you can guess what happend from there.I was too scared to look* never assume buahahaha!!! :twisted: :twisted: thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 Its not bad, you need to clean up some of the lines and such.. but it could look quite nice in a comic style sig... New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ianw77 Posted July 31, 2006 Author Share Posted July 31, 2006 Bump \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knives669 Posted August 1, 2006 Share Posted August 1, 2006 Looking good. Color in his face. ^_^ Though, I'm at odds on whether or not the red outline should be around his mouth.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted August 1, 2006 Share Posted August 1, 2006 Looking good. Color in his face. ^_^ Though, I'm at odds on whether or not the red outline should be around his mouth.. its a mime mask haha thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ianw77 Posted August 1, 2006 Author Share Posted August 1, 2006 BUMP Don't tip the boat don't rock the boat baby! \ \ \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ianw77 Posted August 1, 2006 Author Share Posted August 1, 2006 13 Ump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moron8275 Posted August 1, 2006 Share Posted August 1, 2006 I like it. :) Exept the face looks really odd.. :wall: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ianw77 Posted August 1, 2006 Author Share Posted August 1, 2006 Like because it's white or the mime mask is not right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted August 1, 2006 Share Posted August 1, 2006 the water like...sucks thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ianw77 Posted August 1, 2006 Author Share Posted August 1, 2006 Any suggestions for the water? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sebbeberg Posted August 1, 2006 Share Posted August 1, 2006 It owns as it is! =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megadedhed Posted August 1, 2006 Share Posted August 1, 2006 you could add a bit of shading to the fface, it kinda looks like you were too lazy to make one... :-k Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ianw77 Posted August 2, 2006 Author Share Posted August 2, 2006 It owns as it is! =D> Wow thanks :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imhomer Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 It's cool in a cartoony kinda style. Better than my first. I love the shading on the dhide and the sand and the perspective on the dock is good. Here are a few things to look for: The water shading is bad. I know there's no real good way to do water (at least until lemonfish tells me how he did his ) but any try is better than the airbrush. The horizon needs work. For some reason the sand sticks above the water on the horizon. Very few beaches have an incline like that. One glove is shaded well while the other barely has any shading at all. The swordfish has barely any shading and it looks flat. Try using the lightest colors for the high areas going darker as you get to the lower areas of the swordfish. The text is the same color as the border which can easily be fixed. Finally, please do something about that mouth. The nose isn't such a big deal but the quadrilateral mouth and white face hurt my eyes. Try rounding the edges of the mouth and using the fill tool to color the face. It also looks like you missed coloring part of the right arm because there's a black line that leads to the glove but is blue instead of skin colored. So, boiled down: Work on shading and remember to keep the horizon straight. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ianw77 Posted August 2, 2006 Author Share Posted August 2, 2006 Thanks posts like that really help. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imhomer Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 ok, now that I understand that it's a mime mask here's a tip. On the color palette, choose something slightly grey as "white". Even though it's not a pure white it's softer on the eyes and, when compared to the rest of the sig, looks white anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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