pryomancer Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 My current WIP, the light source is coming from a hole just above the stairs, and I'm going to try and put some light rays shining through- which I have no idea how to do yet, so some pointers would be very helpful. The main character will be me, standing near the tomb in the foreground, but I'm not sure exactly where yet. C+C and the like please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megadedhed Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 looks good so far... i would just work on the anatomy of the guy in the middleground Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 Mmmk first it looks ok but there are some major issues that need correcting... see the angle of the sarco[bleep]as? then look at the wall... atm it would be daganal in the tomb... that isn't good... also tombs are square not cut off ends so the north part where its bent to connect the wall with the stairs isn't quite right... The light is sopposed to be comeing from above the stairs so shade on that side... the other one its not comeing from the left side as the stairs go up on the right... the small guy running away is good but whats with the left leg? he a crip or something?? you really need to work on perspective as the tomb in game isn't NEARLY big enough to have the guy be that far away... quick pointers gound needs texture whole picture needs more action hand looks like its sitting there... need shadeing on walls little bare atm add something else in there ( you choose ) New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted August 27, 2006 Author Share Posted August 27, 2006 see the angle of the sarco[bleep]as? then look at the wall... atm it would be daganal in the tomb... that isn't good... also tombs are square not cut off ends so the north part where its bent to connect the wall with the stairs isn't quite right... Yeah i see ill fix that The light is sopposed to be comeing from above the stairs so shade on that side... the other one its not comeing from the left side as the stairs go up on the right... I dont understand the small guy running away is good but whats with the left leg? he a crip or something?? I thought it was the right leg that was screwed up you really need to work on perspective as the tomb in game isn't NEARLY big enough to have the guy be that far away... true, ill get on that quick pointers gound needs texture whole picture needs more action hand looks like its sitting there... need shadeing on walls little bare atm add something else in there ( you choose ) It's still a WIP so ill do this in due course Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 Yeah sry i ment right leg... wasn't thinking... ok here is what im trying to say with the lighting... you said you wanted the ligh source to be at the top of the stairs right? now if the light is comeing from that direction then its gonna make that side of guthans gauntlet lighter correct? that means the instead of your lighting being on the left side... it should be comeing over the figners and on either side of the hand... got it now?? :P anyway i look forward to seeing this finished :D New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbamxx Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 i love it, Just the guy running awaydosen't look to good IMO. :? But still. Nice job on the fist =D> . Show me a finished product k? :wink: Rip. Archer3 and runescapeAchieved 99 Hitpoints At 8:36PM June-05-09Achieved 99 Strength At 12:17AM March-08-09Achieved 99 Attack At 3:57PM April-24-?09Achieved 99 Firemaking At 5:41PM September-17-08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alduron Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 Good start on that... nothing to add that has not been mentioned already ;) look forward to the completed piece. ~Alduron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted August 27, 2006 Author Share Posted August 27, 2006 ok here is what im trying to say with the lighting... you said you wanted the ligh source to be at the top of the stairs right? now if the light is comeing from that direction then its gonna make that side of guthans gauntlet lighter correct? that means the instead of your lighting being on the left side... it should be comeing over the figners and on either side of the hand... got it now?? :P Yeah I get it now :mrgreen: Thnx everyone for feedback I'll try get it finished soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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