Remember, Im a newb at pixeling.

 

 

 

What do you think of this one? I know it needs shading...but i think its too bad for shading

 

 

 

 

 

 

And my newest one, which is far from over.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Im off to bed, Tell me what you think.

text is horrible, no border. when you finish (shading/depth etc) ill give u more critique.

Its way better then your first pixel avatar :wink:

 

 

 

try making the mat on the floor 3d :

the armour is a brick =;

As said;

 

• Doormat and fireplace are at the wrong perspective.
   
  Don't use that font or colour. The font is overused enough and the colour hurts my eyes.
   
  The bags, try to get the text on them to have a feeling of them wrapping around it.
   
  The hatstand is tiny, compare the size of the hats on it against the guthix helm or wizard hat.
   
  The door cuts through half of the wooden frame, that'd be a hazard in a real house.
   
  Amulet is too small, no one has a neck that small.
   
  The wizard robes look a bit small, make it the same length as the armour.

 

 

 

Err, I think that's all. :uhh:

Ok, sorry if I seem a bit frank, I'm just trying to be objective.

 

 

 

The biggest problem is the wall on the left. You tried to use perspective but made the angle it comes out at waaaaaay too steep making the whole room look slanted.

 

 

 

The fireplace is wierd because the chimney sticks out of the wall and is stone brick as opposed to the rest of the building.

 

 

 

There are no windows

 

 

 

The tops on the large sacks labelled mith ore and coal are too open for the viewpoint.

 

 

 

The text is really bright and lacks a border which would give it better definition and seperation from the rest of the sig.

 

 

 

The amulet on the wal isn't hanging realistically.

 

 

 

You did a great job on the hatrack though and the small hats look like they were done well.

 

 

 

As you said in the title, shading.

WOOT! Added newest one...Off to bed though.

Nice slayer!

 

 

 

 

 

PS- Sucks ur F2P now :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

here is a tip... dont start new one when you havent finished your original...

 

 

 

and sara.... dont encourage unfinished work!