Ok...comment here we go.

 

The arrow, when nocked it should be near the hand, a tad above it even.

 

Try looking at this great googled image for an idea.

 

Also, you could smoothen the transistion from wing to pointy tip, instead of the round shape with a thingy glued to it. The legs seem a bit flat, I think the one nearest to us would hit the ground closer to us than the further one [did that make any sense?].

 

I really like the dragon and the dragonhide, keep it up. :D

 

 

 

P.S. why does he have a leaf on his head? :?

Personally I like the wing so i'm gonna keep it like that. I already know about the arrow but I can't fix it... I tryed. And about the legs, that didn't make any sense.

Aye, I can see where you're coming from with the wing. Fixing the arrow would require changing the entire arm, which would be a lot of work indeed [worth it in my opinion]. What I meant with the legs is that they just seem really flat, and look as if they hit the ground right next to eachother. The line makes it look like there is no space inbetween the legs. Sure he could sit like that [i just tried kneeling like that myself :o] but it wouldn't be very comfy for him and he has to focus on the dragon, methinks.

 

Looking forward to any updates. :thumbsup:

Update:

 

 

Started on a background.... I need help making a flame on the torch.. I just can't get it right, anyone can try.

New update:

 

 

Backgound

what is the circle thingy?

It's suppose to be an agility obsticale thats a shortcut to the blue dragons in taverly dungeon....

One thing that really irritates me, the arrow sits above the hand while being fired.

 

 

 

Phooey, did you read ^his^ advice yet?

 

 

 

I wanted to post that too, you cant range with the arrow under your arm.

 

(so that would be an excellent update for you :wink: )

 

 

 

I like it so far, looks good.

Ya, I read it.. but I can't get it to look right without starting all over and I dont feel like doing that. Maybe i'll try again.

Well, here's my attempt at the fire.... not too good, but yet again, this isn't my style of pixel art, I'm more of an isometric type of person. Ah, well, any good?

 

 

 

 

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Happy to help, if it's alright for you... :roll:

:XD: Just what I was looking for, thanks.

No problem. :wink:

Well i guess you alrdy know that the arrow is supposed to be above the hand : but dont' arrows also have feathers? it looks kinda of strange with just an arrow head and shaft IMO

 

 

 

And the arm sleves blend right into the agility obsticle and it is hard to see where the arm starts and the obstacle begins, mabye change the colors around?

 

 

 

Other than that everything looks good :thumbsup:

to point out some things:

 

 

 

 

 

His robin hood hat should cast some shadow on his face.

 

 

 

Argh! His quiver is empty! He won't stand for long without arrows.

 

 

 

His right leg is too short.

 

 

 

Robin hood hat doesn't have red feather on it?

 

 

 

don't make 1px black bowstrings. they blend in with other lines.

 

 

 

shade the face and arrow and change color on sleeves and gloves(?)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dragon is really good imo. looks very nice.

haha thats awsom :D

DONE WITH DRAWING!

 

 

 

Now I just have to put text on it.

 

 

 

Damn. That's pro for one of your first.

 

 

 

How long did it take ?

Damn. That's pro for one of your first.

 

 

 

How long did it take ?

 

 

 

Thanks for the bump, jackass.

Damn. That's pro for one of your first.

 

 

 

How long did it take ?

 

 

 

Thanks for the bump, jackass.

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry. I didn't intentionally bump it.

 

 

 

I got linked !!!!!!

He made the signature 3 years ago. He doesn't even have it anymore. No point in bumping this