September 25, 200619 yr Author ok whee, that just looks horrible the way you made her eyes, so dont buthcer my drawing plz, ty and the BG is not done yet as i said it's a rough draft, I plan on making it the same quality as the charachter ---------------- Some guy gave me a free santa hat ----------------- -------------------------- And an easter egg! ----------------------------
September 25, 200619 yr dont buthcer my drawing plz, ty Sorry, but this is what I got out of the eyes: The eyes she has now are just tooo-oo small. Again sorry for touching your work. And the duel arena for bg .. Didn't cross my mind, but I think you could pull it out very nice if you put some time on it. =D>
September 25, 200619 yr Author Mandorath: I dont mind if your trying to help, but if you looked at his post, he made them smaller evil eyes, I mean wtf she's smiling, and everyone's complaining about the eyes being to small, it's buthcery to go and put the exact opposite of what everyone wants on her ---------------- Some guy gave me a free santa hat ----------------- -------------------------- And an easter egg! ----------------------------
September 25, 200619 yr whee, theres hair going BEHIND her eye... god... You don't watch a lot of anime do you? Example: Notice how the colour is behind, yet the outer line is above.
September 25, 200619 yr whee, theres hair going BEHIND her eye... god... You don't watch a lot of anime do you? Example: http://www.52poke.com/images/avatars/anime/james.jpg Notice how the colour is behind, yet the outer line is above. I thought that too, but I think he means the hair going under her eye, not the eyebrow.
September 25, 200619 yr whee, theres hair going BEHIND her eye... god... You don't watch a lot of anime do you? Example: http://www.52poke.com/images/avatars/anime/james.jpg Notice how the colour is behind, yet the outer line is above. I thought that too, but I think he means the hair going under her eye, not the eyebrow. I know that, in the picture I provided it is the outline of the eye and the eyebrow over the hair. Besides, I don't think the eye in your version is cutting into the hair, it just looks like a very good alignment. :P Tiara may look better if it looks a little more balanced in the hair rather than just sitting on the top, where it'd probably just fall off.
September 25, 200619 yr cant see img. i mean on te thing whee done, HER left eye has a bit of hair going under it where it goes into the nose area. bits of hair dont randomly go inside ur eye socket and out the other side My photobucket
September 25, 200619 yr Author Tiara may look better if it looks a little more balanced in the hair rather than just sitting on the top, where it'd probably just fall off. It's a clip on tiara : ---------------- Some guy gave me a free santa hat ----------------- -------------------------- And an easter egg! ----------------------------
September 25, 200619 yr Tiara may look better if it looks a little more balanced in the hair rather than just sitting on the top, where it'd probably just fall off. It's a clip on tiara : =O! That's cheating. Anyway, let's hope the background is as good as the actual character. Perhaps faint flames/glow eminating from her? To emphasise the magicalness.
September 25, 200619 yr Author it's not cheating : but ok I think i'm mainly done with the charachter, at least no more major changes, so try to gear your cc towards the BG now, i got a rough draft of the shading done, so rip it apart and tell me what I screwed up :ohnoes: and if there is anyquestions about where the light source is, it is slightly behind the wall in the upper left corner, so I think I got most of the shading right, but feel free to tell me otherwise :XD: ---------------- Some guy gave me a free santa hat ----------------- -------------------------- And an easter egg! ----------------------------
September 25, 200619 yr The coins look good but the banner definatly needs to be dithered to make it look more clothy. I'd also suggest using more colors for the banner.
September 25, 200619 yr It looks pretty good, other than the eyes of course. I draw a lot of manga so I decided to give the eyes a shot.. http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/5961/xeq0.png Maybe not as fierce looking as they could be, but I usually draw manga on paper :-$ Internet Marketing For Newbies
September 26, 200619 yr Author ok yes I think thoose eyes are too big IMO, and I like how the eyes i have look , although eveyron keeps insisting they aren't very good...but one major reason I wont use your eyes (if i did like them) is because they are looking straight forward, i had mine kinda looking to the side, where the person she is fighting will eventually be so...., and yah the banner was the last part I shadded so i majorly rushed it, thats why the colors are soo off : ---------------- Some guy gave me a free santa hat ----------------- -------------------------- And an easter egg! ----------------------------
September 26, 200619 yr Deloria no offence, but she looks like she's high :D. And I think you should still work on that shading, currently the bg doesnt look nearly as good as the mage. :)
September 26, 200619 yr Author Deloria no offence, but she looks like she's high :D. And I think you should still work on that shading, currently the bg doesnt look nearly as good as the mage. :) does no one know what a rough draft is!! ---------------- Some guy gave me a free santa hat ----------------- -------------------------- And an easter egg! ----------------------------
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