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Decided to have some fun with terragen. was origonaly a 1600x1200 render but scaled it down a bit :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lostisland.jpg :FULL VERSION :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lostislandsig.jpg :SIG (min bid 75k, this took a while to make.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, rate away :P My first landscape in a few months so i think it's preaty good :shock:

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If the transition on the mountains wasn't so extreme that would be a kickass signature. Also, keep the text simple. Remove the blur and put something a little less bright. You don't want the text to be the main focus on something like that, let the image speak for itself... we can see that your name is Nadril...

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If the transition on the mountains wasn't so extreme that would be a kickass signature. Also, keep the text simple. Remove the blur and put something a little less bright. You don't want the text to be the main focus on something like that, let the image speak for itself... we can see that your name is Nadril...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i see what you mean :) I'll try and make the text less notable in the sig :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, any idea how to improve the transition in photoshop. doubtfull but who knows lol (i can always fix up on it in terragen :P) :lol:

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9.5/10 (not a ten because you'll top it somehow :P )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good job, Nad. The land texture is good, the water reflection is good, and the clouds are very realistic, which is hard with Terragen. The sun is perfect. Those little stars also add a nice touch to it. As Keiphus said, the text seems a little too showy, but I like it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

However, the signature version doesn't look nearly as good as the large one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You mind PMing me the large (1600x1200) version to use as desktop background?

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9.5/10 (not a ten because you'll top it somehow :P )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good job, Nad. The land texture is good, the water reflection is good, and the clouds are very realistic, which is hard with Terragen. The sun is perfect. Those little stars also add a nice touch to it. As Keiphus said, the text seems a little too showy, but I like it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

However, the signature version doesn't look nearly as good as the large one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You mind PMing me the large (1600x1200) version to use as desktop background?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

heh thanks :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And i think i'm gunna do an improved version at 1600x1200 (that will look good) (this one is a bit too chopy at that lvl) :D

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It's pretty nice i'd say.

 

 

 

Still here's a list of things i'd personaly change/fix:

 

 

 

-I'd tone the waves down a bit...making the sea a bit more relaxing

 

 

 

-I'd also fix the bottom right part of the sea cause it shows some kind of artefact that pretty bothers me :P

 

 

 

-There's another artifact in the all-left darkned zone of the island (a vertical transition line between black and grey)

 

 

 

-Imo the camera distorction is a bit 2 stressed, but that's just personal taste so u can skip this one if u wanted it to be that way

 

 

 

-Add a second surface (grass or rocks...) cause the right part of the island looks pretty unrealistic

 

 

 

-Digitaly get rid of the clear dots in dark areas that terragen loves to place in its renders :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fix the aboves if possible,

 

 

 

8.5/10

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It's pretty nice i'd say.

 

 

 

Still here's a list of things i'd personaly change/fix:

 

 

 

-I'd tone the waves down a bit...making the sea a bit more relaxing

 

 

 

-I'd also fix the bottom right part of the sea cause it shows some kind of artefact that pretty bothers me :P

 

 

 

-There's another artifact in the all-left darkned zone of the island (a vertical transition line between black and grey)

 

 

 

-Imo the camera distorction is a bit 2 stressed, but that's just personal taste so u can skip this one if u wanted it to be that way

 

 

 

-Add a second surface (grass or rocks...) cause the right part of the island looks pretty unrealistic

 

 

 

-Digitaly get rid of the clear dots in dark areas that terragen loves to place in its renders :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fix the aboves if possible,

 

 

 

8.5/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Will do :D Gunna fix up the render tonight and probaly set it on a 3200x2400 ultra super blended render.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

basicly, ownage :lol:

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It's pretty nice i'd say.

 

 

 

Still here's a list of things i'd personaly change/fix:

 

 

 

-I'd tone the waves down a bit...making the sea a bit more relaxing

 

 

 

-I'd also fix the bottom right part of the sea cause it shows some kind of artefact that pretty bothers me :P

 

 

 

-There's another artifact in the all-left darkned zone of the island (a vertical transition line between black and grey)

 

 

 

-Imo the camera distorction is a bit 2 stressed, but that's just personal taste so u can skip this one if u wanted it to be that way

 

 

 

-Add a second surface (grass or rocks...) cause the right part of the island looks pretty unrealistic

 

 

 

-Digitaly get rid of the clear dots in dark areas that terragen loves to place in its renders :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fix the aboves if possible,

 

 

 

8.5/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Will do :D Gunna fix up the render tonight and probaly set it on a 3200x2400 ultra super blended render.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

basicly, ownage :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That will be something to be interested in viewing :)

 

 

 

Keep it up and good luck to your cpu :D

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It's pretty nice i'd say.

 

 

 

Still here's a list of things i'd personaly change/fix:

 

 

 

-I'd tone the waves down a bit...making the sea a bit more relaxing

 

 

 

-I'd also fix the bottom right part of the sea cause it shows some kind of artefact that pretty bothers me :P

 

 

 

-There's another artifact in the all-left darkned zone of the island (a vertical transition line between black and grey)

 

 

 

-Imo the camera distorction is a bit 2 stressed, but that's just personal taste so u can skip this one if u wanted it to be that way

 

 

 

-Add a second surface (grass or rocks...) cause the right part of the island looks pretty unrealistic

 

 

 

-Digitaly get rid of the clear dots in dark areas that terragen loves to place in its renders :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fix the aboves if possible,

 

 

 

8.5/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Will do :D Gunna fix up the render tonight and probaly set it on a 3200x2400 ultra super blended render.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

basicly, ownage :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That will be something to be interested in viewing :)

 

 

 

Keep it up and good luck to your cpu :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

heh heh thanks lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lets see, the 1600x1200 took 30mins, this is probaly gunna take at least all night lol :shock:

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All the credit would go to your cpu if you render the 3200x2400 ultra super blended image

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Otherwise, not bad. Just change the things already mentioned.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol :lol: :lol: probaly :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And i think it can handle it, i've done something like that b4 :shock:

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Being that I was talking to you while you made that, you probally already know I'm just going to say the same thing as The Jeppoz, the surface map needs work :P.

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Being that I was talking to you while you made that, you probally already know I'm just going to say the same thing as The Jeppoz, the surface map needs work :P.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeah, newest version has a new surface map. gunna render it tonight :shock:

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