the_Mattman Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 a new pixel made for link-c6: rate 1/10 and give c/c and maybe some more ideas for the pixel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 Maybe the staff could be a bit darker. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pomar1 Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 Very bad face. ----TheLair Game!----"Game isn't dead... You wish!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 good job on the staff and the hand, but looks like you got lazy on the bg, and the guys head. wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imhomer Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 good job on the staff and the hand, but looks like you got lazy on the bg, and the guys head. Agreed The lava looks awesome as do the trees. The sky is not blended very well and the hand looks a bit too..............bendy. What I mean is that the viewing angle seems to change between the two rightmost fingers and the rest of the fingers. I mean seriously, can you get your fingers to look like that? Howerver, the shading looks good on the fingers, the only problem is with the anatomy. The head, and the hood which suggests the shape of the head, seems waaaaaaaaay too square. The hood also doesn't look that clothy. Additionally there are black outlines on the hood in some areas and brown in others in an apparantly random pattern. Try to clean them up a bit. You got really lazy with the face it seems as there's very little or no detail and it looks as thought the face fills up the entire hood :shock:. The eyes look awesome though. Overall, your work looks great but it just seems you got lazy and rushed it at the end. Thus the lack of Bg and detailing on the face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hawkmeathead Posted October 14, 2006 Share Posted October 14, 2006 i think the finished piece is excelent, maybe if you look at it in real detail, you can see some faults, but overall NICE WORK :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zonorhc Posted October 14, 2006 Share Posted October 14, 2006 The composition is very bland. I see that you're trying to give it a sinister feel, what with the token glowing red eyes, hooded face, and obligatory Wilderness background, but it just doesn't have the right feel to it. Right after fixing the shape of the head and good, give it a tattered appearance, rather than perfect, undamaged material. The hand really takes away from the piece, because not only does it look unnatural just sticking out of the bottom of the frame, it also has that too-healthy complexion that suggests someone who just really isn't evil enough. You can't see enough of the person, but you do see too much of what you can. My advice is to not go for such a close-up shot if you intend on showing very little of the character, but put a lot in the background. Also, placing important features of the piece smack bang in the middle is Not Good At All. At least offset it to the side a little, and give a sense of perspective, rather than just a front view. Those are very boring. Darken the sky. It shouldn't be that bright a shade of blue. You're also more likely to see stars further away from the moon and other light sources. Varrock Library: Shattered Sky | Silent Thunder | The Emperor's FinestAstri @ MythWeavers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo Posted October 15, 2006 Share Posted October 15, 2006 Look Evil, but Great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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