November 30, 200619 yr Guthan Ahrim 128+ Combat \\ 1900+ Total Level \\ 85M+ EXP5,999th To 99 Woodcutting Achieved June 27, 200766,931st To 99 Strength Achieved January 23rd, 2009Draconic Visage: 1+ \\ DK Drops: 169+ \\ GWD Drops: 74+
November 30, 200619 yr arms are too short an thin, and the characters are way too fat, also, since when were hands circles? also dont pillow shade. Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY!
November 30, 200619 yr I agree, they are FAT! draw a hometrainer with then :P But yea, try and make folds into the robes of Ahrim. A human body looks like ) . ( sortof. A fat human looks like ( . ) wich is sortof your work. Also where is his neck, and the legs are too short. On guthan, would you hold a spear like that? kinda anoying to attack. And the ammy is very dark on him. The weapons look good though Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite
November 30, 200619 yr Those characters can go on as Sumo Whrestlers :) Like megadedhed said, they are way to small and fat.. Kinda unrealistic... But keep trying, keep training.. The only method to learn it! (I like the ahrims most, though.. its holding his staff kinda.. super-fake :P) View Blog Nrzonline (Level-114)
November 30, 200619 yr I would advise tracing a picture of someone wearing guthans. Shade it in, Don't be afraid to go dark, Your pictures look very very light and subtle, no good for a warrior. Then if your happy with that, Sketch it out again, without tracing, and shade in again, touching up some areas and improving. Practice makes perfect, Although no one is perfect.. Meh, You know what i mean. My dA account..retired, as of the 1st January 2008.
November 30, 200619 yr Too fat. Weaponry too thin. Not dark enough. Denizen of Darkness| PSN= sworddude198
November 30, 200619 yr You need to work on alot of things Hands- circles?? Guthan - helm... you need to work on the horns you shaped em oddly Spear - looks strange.. also the haft of the spear needs shadeing Face- just cause you want to place a black block there doesn't mean you should Amulet - needs shadeing also the thread isn't bumped at his shoulder Arms - too fat and no muscle Chest - wow, he got man boobs... need i say more? Torso - as said before male and female torso's are shaped like ").(" not like (.) Armor on torso- needs to actually have texture and look like armor... doens't even look metalic Skirt - has eraser marks near the bottom Belt?- why did you half shade over the belt? Knees- Look like round tubers, obviously guthan devloped a spear that could heal since he couldn't walk to a bank to get food... Feet- funny how those feet are pointed away from the body... FIX THAT Ahrim- Staff- eew? Hands are from the wrong angle... Least the top most hand is Fat arms... Hood should have a face and more towards the center of the hood on so close to the edge... Amulet (same as above) Torso- RAWR! more man boobs!! are you gay or somthing?? (ok that was outa line :XD: I just wanted to say that) Skirt needs alot of things you need to shade at angles so that it looks like the robe is falling around the character... you shaded straight down which makes it appear to be a cardboard skirt... Things to work on... ALOT Hands, everyone has em, if you want to draw then start to pop em in there Faces, again everyone has them show it... Arms- buy a muscle magizine and look at the pictures of hot women... Er, i mean look at the muscles on people and try and copy that into your drawing... Overall not terrible drawings, keep at it and you could be really good! Got to work on a few things....but don't we all... Goodluck on your next pieces of work! New sigzor^^
December 1, 200619 yr the ahrims hood looks slighty like a microwave, check out some human anaotmy books, your anatomy is a wee bit off..keep practicing though, thats the best way to improve....well..its the only way to improve :oops:
December 1, 200619 yr Arms- buy a muscle magizine and look at the pictures of hot women... Way to give yourself away. :lol: "We'll bring the sexy back to judging >_>." --Nadril Bleh, once I get off my lazy bum and go to Imageshack, there will be a picture here.
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