well... im reasonably sure ima finish this, so i am going to post a wip.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

meep here goes nothing...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

decided to red/gold-scale it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

dont flame me that its in jpg. its not. photobucket automaticly converts it after you have a certan number of images on it. say one thing about it and i shall havea mod remove your post.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

cc is welcom, along with ideas. this is mainly an experament with one point perspective (sp?).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ter, if you read this, feel free to pimpmy sig :XD:

Omg thats your first???? Your already really good!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good Luck on the rest of it!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

D3M0NX 0ut

Yes I do think your perspective is off in relation to your character, but for a first signature this is pretty damn good eckred, not a senerio choice I'd expect here on a rs forum.. looks very emotional and deep :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I won't edit this for you unless there's something I really think you needed to alter (I only do it for people to learn from), you're doin fine as you are I think atm..

Omg thats your first???? Your already really good!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good Luck on the rest of it!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

D3M0NX 0ut

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

this is not his first by far, but it is the first WIP he has posted :wink: , nice going eck, It is looking good so far....the ony thing I see at a glance is the guys left arm holding the girls legs, that arm is far to long, and unless he is suffering from a bone disease I do not know about, the arm should be shorter, but looking good other than that :)

If you don't want it to be a jpg use tiny pic to get the tags e.t.c and upload the pixel on photo bucket when completly done

D00d 1z l1k3 JPEG!!!!!one11

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

as ter said the perspective its messed up, either redo the charcters in a more upper view or do the bg with a lower vanashing point.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it looks set to be very good and cant remember any pixels with a scene like that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

whats your planning for the background? cos atm its rather plain.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

personaly i would make the characters bigger but thats just me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PJB21

actually, i decided to red-scale it. its goint to be orangey yellows, reds, and a deep shade of blue. inspried by a piece by my frend, and deiced to use her colors =O this is not my first btw, mearly the first wip i have ever posted. half decent pixeler if you even care about my oppinion. yes i think i shall fix the arm, but i already did part of the sidewalk, so i dont think im going to lower the view thing. possibly will try to enlarge the people tho. might be difficult redoin the linework =(