Sinakill Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 Well ive started a pixel, can anyone help me out to improve anatomy, or to enrich the coins so it looks more in depth, just to let cha know im NOT done yet so i still have ALOT more to do, just a rough idea. NEED HELP WITH THE MASK THANKS IN ADVANCE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darrel104 Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 Only thing that stands out it the legs are too long and the chest is too short. the left arm also seems a little crooked. I guess you dont need to worry about muscles since the person is mostly covered up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinakill Posted December 16, 2006 Author Share Posted December 16, 2006 thanks for the input Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinakill Posted December 16, 2006 Author Share Posted December 16, 2006 help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 erm well the main problem is that the sitting position doesn't look very comfortable, im too lazy atm to draw out anything new that could help but im sure there are plenty of pictures that could help you with the positioning, maybe its that your picture lacks any perspective too? the chair looks flat on the screen, and saying that so does the coins, you need to have more depth to each object.. With the coins texturing is all well and good but you still also need depth. xman did something involving people sittin down with coins.. http://img64.echo.cx/img64/4909/misterx ... av34vi.png http://img136.exs.cx/img136/5566/mister ... 7qk0sn.png but your best bet is to search for images of people sitting down, study how and why they look as they do. im not saying trace.. but just observing and trying to make sense of human anatomy goes a long way when you come to trying to drawing it yourself.. just doing simple things like this always helps.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinakill Posted December 17, 2006 Author Share Posted December 17, 2006 Update, need help on the mask now...Thanks for the tips Ter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speedofsound Posted December 17, 2006 Share Posted December 17, 2006 The mask is very small in comparison to the rest of the characters body. The fangs look a bit off and the legs are way out of proportion. Look at what terley said, how a person might really sit. You can't ever find a place that's nice and peaceful, because there isn't any. You may think there is, but once you get there, when you're not looking, somebody'll sneak up and write "(bleep) you" right under your nose. Try it sometime. I think, even, if I ever die, and they stick me in a cemetery, and I have a tombstone and all, it'll say "Holden Caulfield" on it, and then what year I was born and what year I died, and then right under that it'll say "(bleep) you." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted December 17, 2006 Share Posted December 17, 2006 :shock: the mask looks like a blue kiung of town :mrgreen: ..anyways, as for C/C Terley gave a pretty decetn C/C for what I notic ed, but as for the mask, just try to make it look like an actual mask, and not some creepy....blue headed guy. Work on the shape of the head, I have never seen a head of that shape. Check anatomy, the arms seem a bit to long...Practice some feet, dont jsut make them circles, try actually doing the shape of a foot. I like the coins although, they have been niceley done :) . Another thing I might add, is this is almost as cliche as the ahrims mage in the wilderness barraging.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmyk Posted December 17, 2006 Share Posted December 17, 2006 terley stop owning? anyway use the advice on atonomy (spelling ftl) but what is up with all the coins? It's just tiled (very much like the grass in my signature :wink: ) nice background though, it should make for a good signature Proud Retired Council of The GladiatiorzClick here for our website - 110+ F2P Combat Requirements Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
assassin_696 Posted December 17, 2006 Share Posted December 17, 2006 As people have said, try to give the chair a little more depth and substance, and then put the guy sitting down either more central or slightly more upright. He looks very 2D right now. The mask looks a little crooked and the fangs are crooked in relation to the horns. I don't know how you'd improve the coins per-se, but maybe stick a few items in there to give it more depth and 3D effect. Keep it up! "Da mihi castitatem et continentam, sed noli modo" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinakill Posted December 17, 2006 Author Share Posted December 17, 2006 Well, i have worked on it for a bit, not so much the mask and person but i did fix the mask somewhat as to the definition of the jaw, and i fixed the fangs to how i like em :)...now just gotta work on the legs a bit and then shading... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinakill Posted December 19, 2006 Author Share Posted December 19, 2006 bump, more feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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