So... what do you think?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not sure if this is in the right catagory...

Not much work into it..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But this made me smile. :lol:

it was just a quick little comic i pulled together in a few minutes

Too much 'you buy, yes?' panels? You could do this with four, it'd be much more poignant.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You buy spear, yes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No thanks...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Death!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Takes mask*

I like how you make him hold whatever he is trying to sell. Funny ending :lol: :lol:

copyright @ linker? copyright @ buddy kit maker. its a good idea, it just phails at the fact u just added the text / premade buddies.

the whole idea is copyright me, not the images, and the guy selling stuff is meant to be asian by the way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

they arnt premade buddys, i got bits and peices and stuck them together,

eek? so now ur being racist? he done the work, u added the text and the idea. it should be copyright to the both of u really.

eek? so now ur being racist? he done the work, u added the text and the idea. it should be copyright to the both of u really.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what are u talking about? i used peices to make the buddys

did u make the peices? anyway this is startin to become spam #-o

ok, lets just stop talking so much

they arnt premade buddys, i got bits and peices and stuck them together

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lawl ^ that's exactly what a buddy is, bits and pieces stuck together

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The strip is too simple, you need a background

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and like GS said, less repetitive frames, remember- 3 is a magic number for a reason

I like the idea - a lot. I just think that it drags on a little too much. As Godslayer suggested, four panels would probably be enough.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, the simple white background isn't doing it for me. It would be far more attractive if there were backgrounds and if the characters were in different poses every once in a while :P

Awww... Buddies... Pixel your characters and it will be much better.

Yeah a background would make it better, he repeats "You buy Salmon, yes?" is the meant to be there? And make the non-shopkeeper guy face the shopkeeper so they look like they are talking to each other. Pretty good and funny idea though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My uncle is asian, he sells mangoes in his newsagent shop.