dont flame it...i wont care and it doesnt help anyone

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

id just like to know ways to improve this

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

started as this:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hmm... make the skin less yellowish, more tanish... also remove the jumble of bows around, add shading on his p-hat, add some roots at bottom of tree, and fix the leaves at the top... aside from that, 7.5/10

much improvement, but the skin color looks like a richard scary animal! :shock:

how do u mean fix the leaves? there are no leaves...the blue dots r from magic trees

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and i like the jumble of bows :cry:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

new version: the holy knife

 

 

 

huge improvement over your other version, i mean HUGE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

his neck is a little long tho :o

you made some nice improvements dude,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i would 2 remove the bows on the left.

 

 

 

Maybe you should add some tools or a table on the left where you put the bows when they are finished.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Add more detail in the back ground. (the air).

 

 

 

Of course a waterfall and a nice lake with some ducks in it will do fine too. :P

huge improvement over your other version, i mean HUGE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

new version: dark skin

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

does anyone else think the jumble of bows needs to go?

 

huge improvement over your other version, i mean HUGE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

new version: dark skin

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

does anyone else think the jumble of bows needs to go?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I didnt even know it was a jumble of bows at first.

 

 

 

Looked more like those weed things you find in lumby swamp.

 

 

 

LOL, anyway, eithor get rid of them, or fix them so there not as "piled up"

 

 

 

90 fletching, w00t awesome skill, 86 myself.

New skin looks better. You should try shading with different shades instead of just the black lines.

New skin looks better. You should try shading with different shades instead of just the black lines.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

how do you mean? i havnt shaded with black at all

 

 

 

and im 91 fletching...about 1-2hours from 92 but it will have to wait till 2moro :evil:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you made some nice improvements dude,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i would 2 remove the bows on the left.

 

 

 

Maybe you should add some tools or a table on the left where you put the bows when they are finished.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Add more detail in the back ground. (the air).

 

 

 

Of course a waterfall and a nice lake with some ducks in it will do fine too. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

that sounds good...even the ducks..but i dunno how to do it so it doesnt just look small instead of distant...

 

huge improvement over your other version, i mean HUGE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

new version: dark skin

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

does anyone else think the jumble of bows needs to go?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh...thought they were some kind of bush...

 

 

 

so i guess so....

 

 

 

Plus the wooden texture on the trunk...well... :oops: looks weird :oops: :twisted:

k fine...the bows are going :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

gonna be hard to take out...

anyway, you dont need to remove the whole idea of the jumble of bows...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just put them in a reck. That would look much better

I mean on the tree. The solid black lines look strange. You should try just a darker shade of brown or something.

anyway, you dont need to remove the whole idea of the jumble of bows...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just put them in a reck. That would look much better

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hmm a rack...i like it 8) thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

new version: no bows (wasnt as hard as i expected)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit* it looks much better without the bows

 

huge improvement over your other version, i mean HUGE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

new version: dark skin

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

does anyone else think the jumble of bows needs to go?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh...thought they were some kind of bush...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

me too, i thought it was a vine of some sort, it should go, and maybe put an actual bush there, also make the guys skin kinda pinkish, more skin colour,shorter neck, and do sumthing with his nose, looks very strange

new version: short neck, diff nose, and a draft of waterfall

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im not sure how to do waterfalls...this is like a draft

waterfalls are hard,

 

 

 

anyway you can try making a watefall out of the mountains, covering the whole background with mountains.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not sure it will look good though

new version: short neck, diff nose, and a draft of waterfall

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im not sure how to do waterfalls...this is like a draft

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

looks a lot better, about the dripping mountiain, make it more of a cliff kind of horizon, and then water, that may wreck the sig, but it would make it look more like a water fall

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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thats my water fall with waves at the bottom, hope it makesmore sence to you

i might leave the waterfall till later on when i get better

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

new verson: the rack

 

 

 

its a rack of magic long...looks like im drying blue string though :S

 

 

 

Bows definately go, maybe just a few neat ones leaning on tree beside him.

the bow rack is a good idea, but ur bows are way to thin.... their like magic twigs. lol not trying 2 be mean.

 

 

 

also

 

 

 

ur tree is nice

 

 

 

but its sorta small

 

 

 

usualy trunks are skinnier than the tree top so sorta make the tree top a bigger circle.

IMO, change the sky

sry to spam your thread but did you want to buy that bathroom sig from me?

the bow rack is a good idea, but ur bows are way to thin.... their like magic twigs. lol not trying 2 be mean.

 

 

 

also

 

 

 

ur tree is nice

 

 

 

but its sorta small

 

 

 

usualy trunks are skinnier than the tree top so sorta make the tree top a bigger circle.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeh i know the bows are small thats whyi said it looks like im drying string :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i will have a go at making the tree top bigger coz that sounds like a good idea =)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

IMO, change the sky

 

 

 

to what?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sry to spam your thread but did you want to buy that bathroom sig from me?

 

 

 

how much did i say i was paying? i forgot...

 

 

 

:oops: but yeh ill buy it if i can get the random sig thingy going