laxation Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 dont flame it...i wont care and it doesnt help anyone id just like to know ways to improve this started as this: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeXe Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 hmm... make the skin less yellowish, more tanish... also remove the jumble of bows around, add shading on his p-hat, add some roots at bottom of tree, and fix the leaves at the top... aside from that, 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_PoseidoN_ Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 much improvement, but the skin color looks like a richard scary animal! :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxation Posted October 24, 2004 Author Share Posted October 24, 2004 how do u mean fix the leaves? there are no leaves...the blue dots r from magic trees and i like the jumble of bows :cry: new version: the holy knife Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kngkyle Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 huge improvement over your other version, i mean HUGE. his neck is a little long tho :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nachtschaduw Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 you made some nice improvements dude, i would 2 remove the bows on the left. Maybe you should add some tools or a table on the left where you put the bows when they are finished. Add more detail in the back ground. (the air). Of course a waterfall and a nice lake with some ducks in it will do fine too. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxation Posted October 24, 2004 Author Share Posted October 24, 2004 huge improvement over your other version, i mean HUGE. thanks :oops: new version: dark skin does anyone else think the jumble of bows needs to go? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kngkyle Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 huge improvement over your other version, i mean HUGE. thanks :oops: new version: dark skin does anyone else think the jumble of bows needs to go? I didnt even know it was a jumble of bows at first. Looked more like those weed things you find in lumby swamp. LOL, anyway, eithor get rid of them, or fix them so there not as "piled up" 90 fletching, w00t awesome skill, 86 myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 New skin looks better. You should try shading with different shades instead of just the black lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxation Posted October 24, 2004 Author Share Posted October 24, 2004 New skin looks better. You should try shading with different shades instead of just the black lines. how do you mean? i havnt shaded with black at all and im 91 fletching...about 1-2hours from 92 but it will have to wait till 2moro :evil: you made some nice improvements dude, i would 2 remove the bows on the left. Maybe you should add some tools or a table on the left where you put the bows when they are finished. Add more detail in the back ground. (the air). Of course a waterfall and a nice lake with some ducks in it will do fine too. :P that sounds good...even the ducks..but i dunno how to do it so it doesnt just look small instead of distant... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Jeppoz Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 huge improvement over your other version, i mean HUGE. thanks :oops: new version: dark skin does anyone else think the jumble of bows needs to go? Oh...thought they were some kind of bush... so i guess so.... Plus the wooden texture on the trunk...well... :oops: looks weird :oops: :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxation Posted October 24, 2004 Author Share Posted October 24, 2004 k fine...the bows are going :( gonna be hard to take out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nachtschaduw Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 anyway, you dont need to remove the whole idea of the jumble of bows... just put them in a reck. That would look much better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 I mean on the tree. The solid black lines look strange. You should try just a darker shade of brown or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxation Posted October 24, 2004 Author Share Posted October 24, 2004 anyway, you dont need to remove the whole idea of the jumble of bows... just put them in a reck. That would look much better hmm a rack...i like it 8) thanks new version: no bows (wasnt as hard as i expected) edit* it looks much better without the bows Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool_Banana Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 huge improvement over your other version, i mean HUGE. thanks :oops: new version: dark skin does anyone else think the jumble of bows needs to go? Oh...thought they were some kind of bush... me too, i thought it was a vine of some sort, it should go, and maybe put an actual bush there, also make the guys skin kinda pinkish, more skin colour,shorter neck, and do sumthing with his nose, looks very strange Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxation Posted October 24, 2004 Author Share Posted October 24, 2004 new version: short neck, diff nose, and a draft of waterfall im not sure how to do waterfalls...this is like a draft Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nachtschaduw Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 waterfalls are hard, anyway you can try making a watefall out of the mountains, covering the whole background with mountains. not sure it will look good though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool_Banana Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 new version: short neck, diff nose, and a draft of waterfall im not sure how to do waterfalls...this is like a draft looks a lot better, about the dripping mountiain, make it more of a cliff kind of horizon, and then water, that may wreck the sig, but it would make it look more like a water fall ________ | | | | /\/\/\/\/\/\/ thats my water fall with waves at the bottom, hope it makesmore sence to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxation Posted October 24, 2004 Author Share Posted October 24, 2004 i might leave the waterfall till later on when i get better new verson: the rack its a rack of magic long...looks like im drying blue string though :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oilertay Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 Bows definately go, maybe just a few neat ones leaning on tree beside him. [Admin Edit: Religious text Not permitted]~108 combat~5.9k dusties killed / dragon chain :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snipasboy Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 the bow rack is a good idea, but ur bows are way to thin.... their like magic twigs. lol not trying 2 be mean. also ur tree is nice but its sorta small usualy trunks are skinnier than the tree top so sorta make the tree top a bigger circle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allice Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 IMO, change the sky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordBlank Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 sry to spam your thread but did you want to buy that bathroom sig from me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxation Posted October 24, 2004 Author Share Posted October 24, 2004 the bow rack is a good idea, but ur bows are way to thin.... their like magic twigs. lol not trying 2 be mean. also ur tree is nice but its sorta small usualy trunks are skinnier than the tree top so sorta make the tree top a bigger circle. yeh i know the bows are small thats whyi said it looks like im drying string :P i will have a go at making the tree top bigger coz that sounds like a good idea =) IMO, change the sky to what? sry to spam your thread but did you want to buy that bathroom sig from me? how much did i say i was paying? i forgot... :oops: but yeh ill buy it if i can get the random sig thingy going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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