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Another new abstract, this time with line art. Personally, I think it turned out rather well. The render was done in Bryce 5, and all other work was done in Photoshop 7.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So what do you think? C/C appreciated.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(No pointless ratings please. If you want to rate, please leave a comment too. Thank you.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

//Astra

I like it, it reminds me of poop or something gross but i can't place it though lol :lol: But it's good!

same thing as your other, just diff color, 1/10 for chanigng color!

looks nice man :D I like it better than your sharper abstract. It has a lot of depth, and i like the texture you used.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Plus, the line art is realy nice :D Good job :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: Allice... your an idiot. If you think thats the same sig you clearly don't know anything. :roll:

it looks like blood vessels

 

 

 

overall a very good work, looks a lot like ur sig as far as the line work and render goes

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ratings are overrated (no pun intended) but i would give it a 6 just because i dont particularly enjoy this type of abstract, but for what it is, very nice quality

speakabox: Lol, man. Thanks for that. :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nadril: Thanks. I spent a good bit of time on the linework, and it was a ton of fun to make. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cruel_Deacon: Thanks. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Allice: It's a completely different render. I wanted it to be a similar style, but it isn't the same sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

//Astra

speakabox: Lol, man. Thanks for that. :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nadril: Thanks. I spent a good bit of time on the linework, and it was a ton of fun to make. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cruel_Deacon: Thanks. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Allice: It's a completely different render. I wanted it to be a similar style, but it isn't the same sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

//Astra

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sorry, your right, i didnt look closely :oops: , i just glanced, sorry i flamed LOOKS GOOD!

8.5/10 :o

7/10... text is too invisible, lol :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway, nice render... the whole thing blends well, reminds me of plasma and red blood cell

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:D :D :D

Killer stuff there, looks like large veins. I don't know much about abstract but I like how that looks.

Killer stuff there, looks like large veins. I don't know much about abstract but I like how that looks.

Veins are bluish red. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On topic: Looks nice, maybe a bit too similar as your other one but I don't really know much about abstract so...

 

Killer stuff there, looks like large veins. I don't know much about abstract but I like how that looks.

Veins are bluish red. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On topic: Looks nice, maybe a bit too similar as your other one but I don't really know much about abstract so...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I knew it was either veins or arteries. Ok, they look like arteries. :lol:

hmm.

 

 

 

i think the font could use some work.

 

 

 

You need sum good fonts :)

 

 

 

other than that its pretty nice.

 

 

 

just work on the font a little more

hmm.

 

 

 

i think the font could use some work.

 

 

 

You need sum good fonts :)

 

 

 

other than that its pretty nice.

 

 

 

just work on the font a little more

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Which text do you mean? "Astra" or "RED?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for all the comments, guys. :)

 

hmm.

 

 

 

i think the font could use some work.

 

 

 

You need sum good fonts :)

 

 

 

other than that its pretty nice.

 

 

 

just work on the font a little more

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Which text do you mean? "Astra" or "RED?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for all the comments, guys. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

both of them lol

Looks like old candy like lolly pop material. Kinda cool. The line work doesn't really work with it though.

hmm.

 

 

 

i think the font could use some work.

 

 

 

You need sum good fonts :)

 

 

 

other than that its pretty nice.

 

 

 

just work on the font a little more

 

 

 

Exactly what i was gonna say.

 

 

 

Nice job on it though.

 

hmm.

 

 

 

i think the font could use some work.

 

 

 

You need sum good fonts :)

 

 

 

other than that its pretty nice.

 

 

 

just work on the font a little more

 

 

 

Exactly what i was gonna say.

 

 

 

Nice job on it though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks. As far as my name goes, do you think I should change the text, blending style, or both?

both in my opinion

Line work is to pronounce, lower the opacity a bit.

Excellent!! I love it!! Nice and simplistic.. But busy at the same time.

dude :shock: , that looks awesome, i love it :D! 9/10!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i like the whole texture and stuff looks mad!