WIP, Need some advice.

[ThoseTheBrokes]

After the failure of my other one, I've paid a visit to Planetrender and Dafont.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is what I've got so far..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Things to do:

 

 

 

Text [i can't seem to position it right, Or find the right font, Any ideas?]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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[fearspudgod]

Fire looks bad with the backround.

[JacobRyan]

I completely understand what you were going for here. Johnny flame, flames, thing is, it just doesn't go well together. The idea I can understand. But as stated the fire just looks bad.

[ThoseTheBrokes]

It was like that in the render, How could I change it to make it look a little better?

[JacobRyan]

The fire in the background was already in there? If that's the case, I say just edit it all out. Do a custom background and make it SAWEET! Remember go look at those tutorials, there's a lot of good ones.

[runemetsa]

Overcontrasted. Add some black and white gradient layers.