ice_ring Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 Well it's a new scene from my new obsession, terragen :) . Rate 1-10, and please leave me some c/c. Also just wanted to say All your media board are belong to Terragen :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astralinre Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 The texture seems too simple, and the bright green grass doesn't fit. You might also want to fix the bottom right corner of the sky. However, I really like the water and the sky. Very nice looking piece over all. Good job. :) "In so far as I am Man I am the chief of creatures. In so far as I am a man I am the chief of sinners." - G.K. Chesterton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabraulter Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 ok ice, you seem to know how to do it so ill ask you. how do you adjust the camera angle so that you can see the sky and or horizon. it seems like my angles are always right at the ground... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_PoseidoN_ Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 are you going to be buying that dark art sig i made? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qazer Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 err, the textures bad the camera angle is bad the lighting is bad the clouds are bad and the render quality is bad :) but i do like the mountain in the background thats shaded, but i know that wasnt done intentionaly :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pete_the_Viscous Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 I like the water, what with the way it covers the gently sloping parts. I'm not too sure about the rounded-ness of the mountains. It seems sort of... miniature when they roll like that. (I mean the bottom sort of island part; the rest of it's fine. Could you make a darker, rocky texture to cover the lowest exposed section of the things?) deviantart account Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
entangle Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 Two things seem to be missing. 1. The Storm and 2. Paradise. Quit RS 2005 | RSN: JohnalderBack as of 5/7/2008!Dragon Drops: x1 Med, x5 Legs, x4 Skirts, x25 Boots, x1 Visage | x7 Abyssal Whips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qazer Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 Two things seem to be missing. 1. The Storm and 2. Paradise. lol ur such an ***hole :) but its funny, i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shas_O_Jay Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 pretty good 7/10 i like the sky i think the rocks at the bottom look slightly fake however Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ice_ring Posted November 8, 2004 Author Share Posted November 8, 2004 Two things seem to be missing. 1. The Storm and 2. Paradise. ok, and island is considered to be paradise by most, and if u cant tell that it is stormy in the picture well u need some help. ok ice, you seem to know how to do it so ill ask you. how do you adjust the camera angle so that you can see the sky and or horizon. it seems like my angles are always right at the ground... k, could you verify why? ok ice, you seem to know how to do it so ill ask you. how do you adjust the camera angle so that you can see the sky and or horizon. it seems like my angles are always right at the ground... in the terrain menu i think it is try adjusting the height above ground on the camera, or maybe raise the height of the camera target. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
entangle Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 ok, and island is considered to be paradise by most, and if u cant tell that it is stormy in the picture well u need some help. You'll find it's you that needs help if you think that is ANY type of storm. Quit RS 2005 | RSN: JohnalderBack as of 5/7/2008!Dragon Drops: x1 Med, x5 Legs, x4 Skirts, x25 Boots, x1 Visage | x7 Abyssal Whips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 ok, and island is considered to be paradise by most, and if u cant tell that it is stormy in the picture well u need some help. You'll find it's you that needs help if you think that is ANY type of storm. O'rite Entangle, let's see YOU make a storm in Terragen. Need some more lighting in the Atmosphere, I also suggest using 3D clouds if your already not. Also, use a darker colour of grass, and probally make the grass cover more. Add some more contrasting soil colours to the rocky/dirt underlayer (below the grass). Smooth out the water a bit too. Not that bad if your just starting out with Terragen. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
entangle Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 O'rite Entangle, let's see YOU make a storm in Terragen. No thankyou. I'd rather do it the frustrating, time consuming, EFFORT USING way, in a REAL 3D program. Quit RS 2005 | RSN: JohnalderBack as of 5/7/2008!Dragon Drops: x1 Med, x5 Legs, x4 Skirts, x25 Boots, x1 Visage | x7 Abyssal Whips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youmakemesik Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 ok, and island is considered to be paradise by most, and if u cant tell that it is stormy in the picture well u need some help. You'll find it's you that needs help if you think that is ANY type of storm. O'rite Entangle, let's see YOU make a storm in Terragen. I really hate when people say that... You try to give some CC/comments/opinion on the work, and some fool comes along and starts forcing you to do better... Now, I know Entangle's comment wasn't exactly the greatest constructive critisicsm or anything, but it was just a comment, he didn't say he cuold do better... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 Two things seem to be missing. 1. The Storm and 2. Paradise. Ok, here goes my post. First off , about the "storm" now Entangle, i'm preaty sure you have been in a storm before, if you haven't or just haven't gone outside to see one i will understand, and you can just skip this post compleatly. Anyways, during a storm you do not see lightning 24/7. Yes, he could have gotten a lightning stock, and did some work with that, but it becomes preaty tough to do and the lighting effect's he'd have to do would be tough. Now, also, as far as paradise goes, yours and his idea of paradise may be VERY different. just because it isn't what you think it is, doesn't mean you should spam up another post complaining about a program you know very little about. now, as far as the C&C goes, i have a little bit of it. First off, i do realy like the atmosphere. Its the one thing in this peice that realy brings it together :P Now, the surface map can be fixed some. Considering it is a paradise, i'm just "guessing" that there would be a bit of a beach on it right? So i recomend that you maybe study up the slope/altitude controls on your surface map thing, and create a beach. (by giving it a low max altitude and slope.) Then, i would recomend adding more realisitc grass layers, some brighter some darker, and then a nice rock layer as well. Overall, i think that if the surfacemap was changed it could be a very nice looking peice. But i do like the storm, so props on that. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
entangle Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 Nadril, the sky is way too nice and soft for a storm. If he really wanted a storm sky, then he should have gone with more a greyish coloured sky, and who said anything about Lightning? Something else I also noticed, for a storm, there doesnt seem to be much going on. There could be Rain, Wind, Snow, Lightning visible, anyone of those, but instead, his "paradise" just sits there, dormant and still. Quit RS 2005 | RSN: JohnalderBack as of 5/7/2008!Dragon Drops: x1 Med, x5 Legs, x4 Skirts, x25 Boots, x1 Visage | x7 Abyssal Whips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 Well, as far as storms i've seen, it could be the begining, or end, of a storm, or even the eye of the storm (like a huricane) where everything seems peaceful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 He probably just wants the raw Terragen render without postwork in photoshop or whichever program of his choice... and unless there's some secret version out there, I don't recall being able to add rain/snow/lightning in Terragen... which would explain why it doesn't look that much like a storm. BTW not trying to start a arguement since someone will probably comment, I'm just mentioning why I think Ice Ring didn't do any of the things Entangle mentioned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qazer Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 I don't recall being able to add rain/snow/lightning in Terragen... which would explain why it doesn't look that much like a storm. either photoshop it or make a terragen script... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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