DementedHero Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 Well, my friend needed a logo for something, so I made him one :P I think it came out pretty nicely, any thoughts on this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IckyTimo Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 its nice, and so clear wow its realy nice :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DementedHero Posted November 15, 2004 Author Share Posted November 15, 2004 Thanks :) Only crit my mate had was perhaps add some sort of small logo of a phoenix in there.. Ill see if I can get that done tmorrow.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiphus Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 The middle part is way too busy. I can see that you have alot of talent, but I think you should maybe look into what makes good identities. To me, that center is just wayyyy too busy. I like the concept, but I find myself spending more time trying to figure out what it's supposed to say/be than enjoying it as a logo. I like the text on FEN but as soon as it started getting squiggly, it killed it. I don't know how you went about this, but whenever I do logos, I find that sketches really help. I usually do about 100 thumbnails for each logo, it helps me get a better picture of what I want. Good concept, but I'm just not liking the busy-ness of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 just as keiphus said, the middle part is too busy the IxD look like JCX actually that D is how we draw a capital L over here, in short the mid part is a bit to busy/messy the rest is great simplicity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oilertay Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 i really like it. great work :) [Admin Edit: Religious text Not permitted]~108 combat~5.9k dusties killed / dragon chain :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maladrin Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 yeah its really sweet :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J_Rod_The_Ti Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 Yeah it's a bit busy in the middle but other than that great job. I love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
operationfl Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 1 word - Sexy Space out the middle a little bit more and fantastic. Don't hesitate to tell me what you used? I recently got Xara1 for free so :lol: -o- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
venomai Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 A faded phoenix type thing in the back might give it a nice touch. Great logo thing though. I think you should fade/fix the .net part, doesn't seem to fit in as well as the other fonts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DementedHero Posted November 15, 2004 Author Share Posted November 15, 2004 W00t comments :D Ill do as you suggested Keiphus, Ill sketch some variations first, good advice, thanks :) You guys are right, it is a bit too busy in the middle, Ill see what I can do about that :) Expect some updates or new tries soon. Thanks for the comments everyone :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 If you do the pheonix do it tribal style don't make an actual pheonix, otherwise it'll be to busy again. But otherwise nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Water_Faerie Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 Waay too many fonts in there.. But at first glance, it's wonderful. Nothing someone who wasn't into design would worry about.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted November 16, 2004 Share Posted November 16, 2004 Looks very nice, i dont think its too busy myself. Only thing i would fix the I, i thought it was an L atfirst, untill i read the title did i realize. But its very nice. Edit: figured it was a D, kinda confused more. You should fix it Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qazer Posted November 16, 2004 Share Posted November 16, 2004 i really like it, and jebus cripes... if u cant read it... maybe u shuld take a break from the computer... and no i dont think its too busy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiphus Posted November 16, 2004 Share Posted November 16, 2004 Waay too many fonts in there.. But at first glance, it's wonderful. Nothing someone who wasn't into design would worry about.. Yeah, that's my main beef. Too many fonts, but not something your average joe would notice. But keep in mind, alot of identity has to do with the the human psyche... it's a subliminal feeling of... "no i dont like it" or "yes I do like it" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrothKahn Posted November 16, 2004 Share Posted November 16, 2004 It looks cool and all, but the logo isn't legible enough or CLEAR enough to immediately indentify what it says. Try working on making it clearer whilst still utilizing the same design elements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DementedHero Posted November 16, 2004 Author Share Posted November 16, 2004 Thanks guys :) It are actually only 2 fonts, but I see what you mean with too many fonts.. Ill trim down the busyness a bit, and see which things I can add on, or change.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiphus Posted November 16, 2004 Share Posted November 16, 2004 Do you think you could post a higher res version? Maybe just a bit bigger so I could kinda chop it up and show you what I'm talking about? If not that's ok, just thought I'd ask. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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