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The middle part is way too busy. I can see that you have alot of talent, but I think you should maybe look into what makes good identities. To me, that center is just wayyyy too busy. I like the concept, but I find myself spending more time trying to figure out what it's supposed to say/be than enjoying it as a logo. I like the text on FEN but as soon as it started getting squiggly, it killed it. I don't know how you went about this, but whenever I do logos, I find that sketches really help. I usually do about 100 thumbnails for each logo, it helps me get a better picture of what I want.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good concept, but I'm just not liking the busy-ness of it.

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W00t comments :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ill do as you suggested Keiphus, Ill sketch some variations first, good advice, thanks :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You guys are right, it is a bit too busy in the middle, Ill see what I can do about that :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Expect some updates or new tries soon.

 

 

 

Thanks for the comments everyone :D

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Looks very nice, i dont think its too busy myself. Only thing i would fix the I, i thought it was an L atfirst, untill i read the title did i realize. But its very nice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: figured it was a D, kinda confused more. You should fix it

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Waay too many fonts in there.. But at first glance, it's wonderful. Nothing someone who wasn't into design would worry about..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah, that's my main beef. Too many fonts, but not something your average joe would notice. But keep in mind, alot of identity has to do with the the human psyche... it's a subliminal feeling of... "no i dont like it" or "yes I do like it"

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