Sake_Samurai Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWhy do you torment me so?!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jak722 Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 Oh beer... why must you torment her so? The story was actually pretty nice! :D i'll never look at a glass of beer the same way again... :shock: The Enrichment Center reminds you that the weighted companion cube will never threaten to stab you and, in fact, cannot speak. In the event that the weighted companion cube does speak, the Enrichment Center urges you to disregard its advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXAbyssalXx Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 That was really good. Keep it up :D |Noobs :roll:|Ebaums steals! :evil:|Go Stephie! :mrgreen:|http:// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
purescimmy Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 alcohol is bad kids, let this be a lesson. lol, great story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sake_Samurai Posted November 19, 2005 Author Share Posted November 19, 2005 thks peeps!! i didnt expect so much positive feedback, because one guy in the general forum said it was too long and too boring. but i know there are little errors in it, and i will try to fixem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jak722 Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 like I what ive said, some people here cant be bothered with literature... Its really nice, you should add more :wink: The Enrichment Center reminds you that the weighted companion cube will never threaten to stab you and, in fact, cannot speak. In the event that the weighted companion cube does speak, the Enrichment Center urges you to disregard its advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sake_Samurai Posted November 20, 2005 Author Share Posted November 20, 2005 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abyssalreaper Posted November 20, 2005 Share Posted November 20, 2005 its great lol i had the same experience with burnt lobsters (dont ask just dont ask) Proud Acolyte of the Ooc Cmon Steve you can do it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sake_Samurai Posted November 21, 2005 Author Share Posted November 21, 2005 im asking :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abyssalreaper Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 Lol I'd get into but then I'd be thread hijacking this great story and it's a story for another time. Oh yeah in the next part is Sake Samurai going to give her good ol' pal Abbyssal Reaper some of the 10mil :D just kidding but if you want to give me always remember ill put it to good use (:twisted: *starts laughing diabolicaly* Proud Acolyte of the Ooc Cmon Steve you can do it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barihawk Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 The only story in Varrock Library I have read this year better than this one has been Gaal and Smoke...only because I am addicted to them. Wow, I applaud you. This is definately one of the better works here. My heart is broken by the terrible loss I have sustained in my old friends and companions and my poor soldiers. Believe me, nothing except a battle lost can be half so melancholy as a battle won. -Sir Arthur Wellesley Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sake_Samurai Posted November 23, 2005 Author Share Posted November 23, 2005 hey peeps, i fixed some of the little errors, except for teh head wizards name and the spelling of "abrury" besides that, i have noticed a few errors on the subject of alcohohol. so i am writing another story!!!(because i cant think of anything original) so writers block can be bye-bye. aaaannnnd! this is the last time i will bump this topic. adios peeps. Kah bah gee(im such a poser) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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