The Story of Red - Final Chapter Up

Hey, I'm going to try my hand at writing things for this board. Before Blipo started his "Scape" story (you should go read it, by the way), he wanted forum members to submit ideas for characters. I submitted one (the guy named Red in chapter 1), and I liked the character so much, I decided to write my own story about him. I wanted to post this story after Blipo was all finished, but he hasn't updated in awhile, and I don't want to wait. Be patient; it's a multi-chapter story that I will update every couple of days with a new chapter. If you like it and want me to continue, please say so and I will. If nobody likes it, I'll let it fall. Enjoy!

The Story of Red

Chapter 1

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It's a good start...what next :)

~Alduron

Interesting, to say the least. I liked how you were able to take up a minute of speach in a page, normally I don't use speach at all. It was also nice that you did some description and history in such a short space of time. As always the question is can you keep it up?

Interesting, to say the least. I liked how you were able to take up a minute of speach in a page, normally I don't use speach at all. It was also nice that you did some description and history in such a short space of time. As always the question is can you keep it up?

Yeah...three chapters are written, will post them one at a time.

i like it

gj so far :D

Interesting, to say the least. I liked how you were able to take up a minute of speach in a page, normally I don't use speach at all. It was also nice that you did some description and history in such a short space of time.

Archimage is correct on that point, The amount of detail you packed into 15 lines of conversation is astounding.

Here's chapter 2!

you do a good job of making rs characters seem real unlike most fanfics.

Yeah I actually feel that the story is possible. Not just 1 character and then alot of NPC's.

Thank you! :D

I like the story. KEEP WRITING PLEASE! It's very interesting..

The strange thing is that unlike many of the other stories...It could happen is a REAL LIFE runescape.

Anyway I love the story, the last chapter shows that he is quick to resolve problems with violence if needed. Though will try a little bit of talking first.

Now that chapter 4 is up, I have a little trivia question.

Parts of this story are very loosely based on my favorite movie in the world (The rest is based on a true story :) ) Now, what movie is it?

I continue to enjoy the story, it has the same realism that we have seen in the prevouis chapters, all we need now is wait for the next.

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well the guy must not be very intelligent, because the signs are all there. He compares himself to Regan rather than insulting regan shows that hes not much better (competitor vs. scum). The location is another, its a fairly rough inn and yet hes making buisness deals there. An, Honest buisness man would try getting guards from a more trustworthy place.

well the guy must not be very intelligent, because the signs are all there. He compares himself to Regan rather than insulting regan shows that hes not much better (competitor vs. scum). The location is another, its a fairly rough inn and yet hes making buisness deals there. An, Honest buisness man would try getting guards from a more trustworthy place.

Man, you're picky...

well the guy must not be very intelligent, because the signs are all there. He compares himself to Regan rather than insulting regan shows that hes not much better (competitor vs. scum). The location is another, its a fairly rough inn and yet hes making buisness deals there. An, Honest buisness man would try getting guards from a more trustworthy place.

 

 

 

Man, you're picky...

Take it as a compliment, for most other people I just tell them to fix up spelling and grammar cause I'm too bored to do much more. I try to comment on anything I read. And honestly, I'm just trying to make sense of that line, it really threw me for a loop when I read it.

Take it as a compliment, for most other people I just tell them to fix up spelling and grammar cause I'm too bored to do much more. I try to comment on anything I read. And honestly, I'm just trying to make sense of that line, it really threw me for a loop when I read it.

Thanks then :)

Well, here's chapter five and nobody has even tried to guess what movie this is (sort of) based off of. If you can't get it after reading this chapter, then I'm apalled! :lol:

Good twist, 5 dwarf multi-cannons...Zaros man, that a bit heavy isn't it, particually if the other one only had 1 cart.

Anyway maybe its that we read to much and watch too little film.

In light of Easter, I'm giving you two chapters instead of the usual one. What does everyone think so far?

woah... A psychoanalyst would have a lot of fun if he ever got his hands on red.

'psychoanalyst' I believe is hyphnated, I may be wrong.

'silently chatting'? I imagine you mean mouthing words or a series of looks. I don't think in is telepathy. But just to be safe....

The story was incredibely interesting although chapter 6 was possiblely the shortest I have ever seen. Any how I await the next installment.

woah... A psychoanalyst would have a lot of fun if he ever got his hands on red.

Did I say he had a plan? I thought I did... I guess I forgot to include that...or am I going crazy?

Man, my English is bad...