Protip: Unexpected and unrelated endings often have the best effect if you're given full creative liberty. I would personally put in zombies, cause that's what I do. Of course I usually get C's in English, so I might not be your best adviser. Edit: Wongtong's method also works out great for anticlimax. Very funny if used well. What?! I was taking the piss! Don't use it! It's one of the worst endings ever. :lol: Which is what makes it brilliant. Next time I get a creative writing assignment (no idea if I ever will :lol:) I am going to write the most terrible story ever. Something like any sports movie, person sucks, blah blah, team/person somehow good now then sucks then wins whatever title. Except everyone ends up dieing, and nobody wins. [/hide] Brilliant :lol: Agreed, probaly why I usually fail. This year I did the same thing, I orginally intended for a guy to get shot in the leg and not die, and the soldiers to rescue him or something. But the soldiers ended up killed with chainsaws, because it seemed more fun... (I ended up re-writing it though because I actually had to pass...) Edit: Is it just me or does this font seem the wrong size?