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Click to reveal C/C [hide=]No flow in it really, other than the background, by motion blur. * What it needs it some effects that are not over the top. 4/10. Same as the first The effects run over Chief, which is a major no no. Put the render above the effects, or erase with a soft brush over the top of him on the effect layers. * 2/10. The background is quite nifty, but the render does not match it :( * This one is your best :) * The starry stuff looks good with the render, and it is good how you have erased the effects over him in this one. And the glare on her face is a nice touch, although slightly too bright. . . 5/10. * Terrible text[/hide] Keep reading up on those tutorials :)

Abstract, quite possibly? :lol:

Any more thoughts on this, please?

Any chance you can give me another render? Tried it 4 times, all failed :-s Any more orders?

Haha, nice concept there ;) Can't really see any flaws in it, other than the corners being straight. Although, I'm pretty sure you will be beaten up if someone sees you with this :lol:

What there lacking is a render ;) These are really just text, and rectangles :P Go onto deviantART and start looking at some signature tutorials. What program are you using?

Whats KIU? Ok so when I get on the other comp I will: *Erase Wireframe From car *Lower Car's Contrast I was going to add text but it all looked bad so I left it out... KIU = Keep it up ;)

Colour one definitely. Only use B&W as a last resort, if your colour scheme is absolutely terrible. Erase the effects that go over the car, it doesn't look good. Make the contrast on the car a little lower too, it doesn't look too appealing. The depth and flow in this are pretty nice, however :) KIU :thumbup:

My god, I have been really lazy at the moment. I have not made anything for ages! Meh, took my long enough to make. Finding C4D's for this were [cabbage] hard D:

Onto the work - Really need to know what program you are using before any advice can be made other than the advice already posted. He's using Paint.Net. That tile thingy sticks out for a mile telling you it is.

LP stands for Large Piece ;) Which is self explanatory :P

My only advice is try to make it more of your own work :x And save it as .PNG, not .JPEG, as that rapes tags.

Updated the first post, saying no sub text. Guys, the reason we don't add it is because it looks terrible, and that is the honest truth.

I'll take the border off, but I'm still unsure of the text. . . Thanks for the comments everyone : It's a signature :lol: But thank you ;)

You seem surprised. Many of the best graphic artists here are on GIMP. Including me :oops: Hey, I use PDN :twss: :lol: Anyway: You need to do more than get a background off Google, a render, and a C4D. I wouldn't be at all surprised if this took you 10 minutes. You need to go back to the signature basics really, as you have none in these tags. No flow, depth, focal point, nothing. I would expect these to come from someone who has just started, rather than someone who knows what they are doing. I'd recommend reading up on some more tutorial techniques. I am sure there will be heaps on deviantART for GIMP. Check out these as well: http://jopie211.deviantart.com/favourites/#Tutorials

Guthan, apologies for not having this done. Stayed the night at my mates, so no computer.

All right, I'll change the border :( And I could not physically put in a C4D without ruining the colour scheme, or the whole tag :( But I can do the rest ;) Thanks :)

Lol. T3h Wookie render is a good cut, but it terrible in practice. No flow or anything, just a blob and a sniper.

arrr, t3h Wookie render :lol: I'll take that, Shiny you can do Nerd, and whoever can do Lemeja :)

Getting more into other techniques now :) C/C please? :)

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What did you get, headphones or earphones, or something else? I has these, they're so awesome, I love Skullcandy. http://www.skullcandy.com/shop/hesh-p-5.html I got these ones Love them sooo much :) http://www.skullcandy.com/shop/full-met ... -p-30.html I was going to get the Hesh's, but they cannot be used with a helmet, as Cool KIDZ wear LIDZ.

Lol :lol: Thanks Sam ;) And yeah Guthan, post it in this shop :)